A game about an unfortunate soul (you) being dragged unwillingly into the world of the 'supernatural'.

Yeah, sorry about that. I'm working on a page that I'll post later for people to give their opinions on. Also, you're right. I was writing the story out of sequence before deciding to go back that I ended up getting confused. Thanks for commenting and correcting me :)

That's very true. Thanks so much for your input :) Hopefully, I can manage to pull it off.

Newbie here, but working on my first story, Paranormal Beginnings (eh still working on the title). Its going to be a prequel to this paranormal investigator series I'm working on as a whole if enough people are interested. Because the main character\reader in Paranormal Beginnings is a child, it will be less of a 'detective' story and more of a survival horror type of game. Anyway, I want to get the public's opinion before getting started. Don't want to put a lot of time and energy into something nobody wants to read lol. So, what do you guys think? Is this a good idea, or a boring cliche story that's been done too many times before? 

I don't usually "cry" while reading books (only movies and music can bring me to literal tears). But, I do end up doing this 'laughing on the outside but totally crying rivers on the inside' kind of thing if a book moves me. Off the top of my head, the book that did manage to get a couple teardrops out of me, was Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. In my defense, I can smell a possible death\sad ending in a book from a mile away, but some of the deaths in that books were so random that I was blindsided. (Curse you Fred Weasley for unexpectedly dying while talking in mid-sentence!!!! D'X)