Karnkrit, The Reader

Member Since

7/19/2016

Last Activity

8/30/2017 7:09 PM

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48

Post Count

2

Storygame Count

0

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Warden

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I AM

Storygames

Headquarters
unpublished

A young man and a vision,

Standing in Burning Raven street, upon the recent discovery of his superpowers, a young man becomes obsessed with the idea of forming a team of people with superhuman attributes, but what will the true fate of this man be?

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Note that this is my first advanced editor story and that English isn`t my mother tongue, that being said, feel free to correct my grammar and give feedback


Sburb game
unpublished

A game based on a webcomic called homestuck, which consists on a combination of common RPGs and the Sims, it also involves the destruction of the world, have fun. This story will include alchemizing (combining items) god tiers ( special skills ) prototyping and possibly trolls (aliens). 

THIS MIGHT BE NEVER FINISHED

 


The corpse
unpublished

NOTE:English isn't my mother's tongue , so dont expect the best grammar and writing, although i could certainly improve.
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After an ominous dream involving an eerie corpse, the thought of a decaying body gets stuck into your mind.
Will you try to get it out of your head? or will you instead try to live with a corpse constantly bugging you?


Recent Posts

How broken is the english in my storygame draft? on 8/22/2017 10:34:34 PM

Thanks, i thought it was far worse. Yeah, sometimes i use the wrong symbol, i will consider your advice for my next update.


How broken is the english in my storygame draft? on 8/21/2017 9:41:46 PM

So basically, English is not my mother's tongue , as so my written English is not the best, however i just realized how clunky it is after proofreading my storygame. Then,  do i need a few months of practicing my English to start writing seriously? or you wish you were blind just by reading my storygame?

Note that this is merely a storygame drafting wannabe an the fact that i started using the advanced editor because i had previous experience in coding and CYA websites.

LINK: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Headquarters