Mysterymaster, The Reader

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10/20/2016

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10/28/2016 11:53 PM

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Hey, guys! I just want everyone to know a little about me. Not only am I a little kid, but I'm super immature for my age! My best friends are typically a few years younger than me, but I think that's because we have the same mentality. I consistently get caught doing things I am not supposed to do by my parents and get grounded all of the time. Probably why you won't be seeing me on here often; ESPECIALLY after 10 pm, which seems to be the best time to sneak around on stuff. I spend so much time considering how to sneak around and manipulate my parents that I QUITE OFTEN forget to bathe and brush my teeth, leading my step-mom to remind me of doing on a daily basis. Sometimes I feel bad for the people who I call friends at school, because they have to smell me; I'm used to the stench, by now. I guess that's all for now, if you have questions, you can always send me a private message, but my parents will probably intercept those first, so nothing inappropriate, please!

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Protectors of This Land
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Recent Posts

Snapchat on 10/27/2016 8:40:32 AM

Thanks. :)


Snapchat on 10/26/2016 10:17:05 PM

What's wrong?


Snapchat on 10/26/2016 9:48:19 PM

Your sharing personal info.


Snapchat on 10/26/2016 9:28:49 PM

Ford, you just told everyone around the globe, your personal snapchat.


Throwing around sci-fi gadget ideas.... on 10/26/2016 2:19:44 PM

I think that the gadget ideas sound as if they are real and scientific as real gadgets.  I believe you should add a bit more science behind them to really show the reader that they were created by high technology. Make them believe that the gadget is helpful and you should also say what weaknesses and strengths of the gadgets. Maybe you should also share to the reader when and where the gadget works best. But other than that, I sounds really cool.