The game is about Garry Gren and his struggles with depression, anxiety and lonelynes.

Yeah, I will do that fore awhile. Still don`t know exactly where my story will end, I change my mind to much

Thank you. I really appreciate your advice. It made it easier for me to keep writing and not get suck at the details as I often do. But the first paragraph only felt condescending and unnecessary.

But I think I did the mistake to not take time to play enough storygames to get a feel of how they usual are written, before I started to write my story. During these last day I have mostly played some other storygames and started to rethink my approach.
I also think I will brainstorm for a wile. =D

So again thank you

Hi  I am new to this kind of game development and game development over all. How much time should I spend on describing a room for example? I know that the story should be short and not to complex to begin with, so i have not  described anything else than sounds and the charactars actons.