fanseerd, The Reader

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Idea Feedback on 5/27/2016 10:59:06 PM

This is my first storygame since I joined this site. I created this in order to get some feedback on my idea and whether it is good for me or not. This is the game's description.

 You have so many questions. 'Where am I? What happened?' All will be explained in time. In the end, you will know  why you are chained in a dark room talking with a stranger, you will know who this stranger is, and you will know if there is any hope for you to escape and live.

Basically, the story starts with the reader knowing nothing but genders of the two characters. You are chained in a  dark room with a man you can't see. He allows you to ask questions that flashback to points that the reader chooses, shaping the story and affecting other choices as well as the ending. 

At the moment, the title is 'The Questions'

Please give me some feedback on how this could be improved and thank you.