trim the strings
light the lights
its time for us to fly
for the time is right!
this isn't a song
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I mean like what genre is this supposed to be.
I did say it was a work in progress!jeez.
if I catch a homeless bum halfway through pinching a log on my floor, and tell him to fuck off, he can't tell me it's a work in progress and to wait and see how it turns out
You really should be a little bit nicer and not an ass
@mizal I was going to tell this guy to go check your profile out so they can find that grammar site you used to have linked in your profile. Evidently it is not there any longer, so I cannot simply tell newbs to look at your profile anymore. This saddens me.
I can tell you're gonna last long here kid.
Because of you're innate brilliance at social interactions, your clear superiority at using grammar, and (most importantly) your winning personality. Obviously.
I used to screw up socially and I’m a bit of an emo,so,ok.
I thought that was pretty good tbh.
Depends on if the bum is an "artist" or a stand up comedian.
If he's an "artist, he can fuck off. If he's a stand up comedian and his "work" is part of some elaborate joke then that's some funny shit right there.
For future reference, you might consider posting more than 20 words for stuff like this. Also, What is the point of posting this here? I would suggest asking the community actual questions to help expedite the creative process that you're going through here. Otherwise you open yourself to being flamed by the community.
Do you have a tune in mind, or are you just writing something you think might go well to music?
Well your nicer than most people! I’ve got the tune in my mind
Well, the power of music is the combination of words and the tune. We're only seeing half of the product here, so it's hard for us to really know if it's doing any good. :) I have no musical skill at all, which is why I'd call anything like that a poem instead of a song. Unfortunately I gave up writing poetry a long while ago, so I'm not very good at giving advice on the subject.
That’s a way to put it.
Don't be discouraged, new person. The blood's just kind of in the water in this place when unfinished stuff rears it's head. Especially for stuf like song lyrics, which are rarely ever masterpieces and usually aren't great read rather than sung. Anyway, best of luck.
If I hadn’t changed my mind,my blood would be on the floor next to my corpse!
No idea what that means, but OK.
It means I was going to do suicde on New Years eve
Yeah Steve. Don't be so dense.
Indeed. Begs the question if Steve was joking or not about not knowing what that meant.
Obviously it isn't "Kawaii Metal"
Saving this for later.
Yep, figured you'd be all over this one, after your posts in that Youtube fanfic thread.
oh come on you guys half of that shit in that post was just for the lulz. you have to beleive that I'm not that big of a degenerate with only one or two shameful internet interests.
Nah I believe it. Especially since the only thing I really know about you is that your love for anime dating sims runs so deep that you've spent the last eon trying to create a romance story game equivilent.
At least I think it was you that was doing that.
I feel a bit insulted that that's all im known for around here.
I have also been bragging about my insane love for Highschool set anime dating sims so that should have gotten a little more recognition from you then some simple shitty harem plot anime games.
Digit in five words: Anime dating sim fanatic.
EDIT: fifth word not needed
NOW it makes sense
Re-reading that I see that huge error, take it as you will.
Meh, at one point, it would have been unthinkable to willingly talk to anime addicts, aspies, furries, sexual deviants and other mentally ill folks, but I've been on this site so long now, that I've gotten to the point where I've just accepted that everyone on here with a few exceptions is a complete degenerate.
What qualifies as a non-degenerate?
Do you just have random things like this saved away ready for use?
I see what you mean
At the time I was going through metal genres to listen to on YouTube and eventually I stumbled upon that one. I was going to make a thread in the Lounge, but I figured this was as good of a place as any to post it.
Honestly, still more tolerable than Fred Durst and his Nu Metal shit.
Saw these bitches live at Carolina Rebellion... lmao.
Your meter looks like a random number generator: 184.108.40.206.4.5. i.e. there is absolutely no regularity whatsoever. The first two lines look fine although I have no clue what they're about. Also by sounding it out I doubt the word emphasis is correct either. Do you have a tune in mind?
I figured Berka was using Mooses to express his artistic integrity of breaking tradition and not being a corporate sell out.
Father John can't have mooses in the parish, but he can have several moose