hey guys if you haven't noticed me floating around here already my name is azefra and I'm a few days new to the site now and was wondering if i could get some feedback on the preview of a story i am working on thxhttp://chooseyourstory.com/story/born-legends
Might want to fix the paragraph errors.
Good, problem is that that the font is too small, and the paragraphs have big spaces in between and shifted around.
Its spaced like that because of the "center" paragraph setting lol. the small font and 1 space make it seem like a bigger gap then it is
Font is tiny, Also... why does the Font change on page 2?
merely an oversight. the first page should have the same as the others
thx guys I will work on these things and get back to you @ Aman what kind of problems? And out of curiosity would you guys mind telling me the outcomes of your quiz pls
bad grammar. Correction: (i) YOU kick in the door and pull people from the flames at serious risk you yourself.
Other than that not bad, I got a Cleric.
thank you i originally structured that sentence differently and then opted to change it
grammar mistakes are to be expected and I hardly ever (unless you're arrowzworra) take points off for grammar. I just wanted to make you awares to it.
http://chooseyourstory.com/story/born-legends thx, ok I think i fixed the quiz so you should be able to get something other then a cleric lol. I also changed the font and the size as well as a few other minor things
And now it's gone? Did you hide it or delete it ? :)
