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A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Just as it said, I got rhymes in my head, (there it is again! Fuck!) and I decided to use those rhymes to criticize a bunch of stereotypical issues in America. I'm not sure if I actually believe what I'm saying, but it does sound nifty.

As I sip a glass of blood with my silk-gloved hand,
Blood shed by the slaves of a far-away man,
I start to think of the things that are wrong with this land...
A thousand Crusades and a thousand Jihads,
Killing in the name of one misunderstood god.
Every big dog fights for poison and gold,
They're screwing us all, but we do what we're told.
We're robbed with their paper, we're bleeding and scarred.
We suddenly wonder why life is so hard.
Looking for a lesser evil will leave you disheveled,
"The other side's all nazis possessed by the devil!"
And as we bite a hole in the sheild that protects us,
We seem to forget that we're knee-deep in our pus.
As we march in line through societal veins,
Just puppets on strings made of money and pain,
Most of us too blind to realize we're in this position,
Most of us are too scared to use our volition.
And every day more of us are fed to the sharks,
By blood-hungry kings, and self-righteous oligarchs.
Philosophers in vain try to heal the condition,
of our plasticine food and our con-man physicians.
They've outlawed the wheel and they've given us pills,
So we can't feel the pain of our brains on their drills.
And now I'm done with this depressing nonsensical propaganda.
I guess those are the reasons why I'll try out ol' Canada.

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Is this a song, rap, or poem? 

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

It's a song, which is why it only really rhymes consistently if you sing it the right way.

It's not easy to sing on a keyboard, and I can't write music, so I'll leave that up to your imagination.

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

You should sing it, and put it on Youtube. 

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Youtube lags the fuck out of my computer, all I can really give you for a clue is that I either had Alice in Chains or Black Sabbath playing it in my head whilst I wrote it. It sort of alternated between the two for some odd reason.

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Youtube lags the shit out of your computer? What kind of computer do you have? 

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

A computer that runs every website well, (Even had 3 deviantart flash games up at once one time) except Youtube. It takes a while to load, and then the video runs just fine, but there's such godawful hiccups in the audio that I can't tell if the person's talking about politics or making a really bad attempt at record-table-operated dubstep.

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Must be a very old fashion computer then. 

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Not necessarily, my Old comp looked like this and ran YouTube fine.http://static.ddmcdn.com/gif/how-to-donate-computer-1.jpg

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Your old computer looks very nice. 

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Nah, it's only 4 years old. It just doesn't treat videos very nicely.

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Windows 2000? ;P 

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

No, windows 7.

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

That's not too old. Unlike Tan. 

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Sentinel was this you?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zXGxo6mHLzc

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

School block says "GTFO SENTINEL!" so I don't know what's on that video.

But if you're accusing me of plaigiarism, then I very well might be. I fell asleep with the radio on last night and my peaceful dreams managed to survive the midnight death metal hour, so maybe the whole song is a pre-existing one stuck in my subconscious?

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Hehe, shame. It was you dancing with your fellow penguins singing a song called "Party Like a Penguin"

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

Lol. Don't make fun of Sentinels penguins!.

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

But it was an amazing video that he made!

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

I agree. It was amazing .

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

That's strange... When I bypassed the school block all I found was a party of these...

And they were pollenating each other in rythm to various uncomfortable 70s techno music... DAMMIT CRABGRASS! STOP LINKING ME TO YOUR PORNOS!

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

What it is...enticing.

As for the link, it leads to an amazing penguin song.

A song whining innacurately about the world.

9 years ago

I like it lol.