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All right, this is something I've been talking about in multiple comment sections, so I'm just going to go ahead and talk about it at more length here. 

There's a sadly increasing number of very short storygames being published with "part 1" right up front in the name.  I've wondered for some time what reason these authors had to publish a story they knew was unfinished.  Perhaps they were simply eager to publish something? Perhaps they were used to linear fan fiction, which is often published as an ongoing saga.

I finally got some replies from authors, and it was. . . not what I was expecting.

"The story was short because I got bored."  Seriously?!  That's the number one reason?!!  You're tired of writing now, so you just posted whatever you had done and called it good?  Look--if you found it boring to write, do you really expect anyone reading it to be interested?  (To the warriors authors who said having to write the same page twice for male and female was boring, I suggest making different paths then.)    

I guess that does explain why no one ever returns to give us a Part 2 though . . .

Does "part one" constitute deleting the same as a "sample" does?

Personally, I think most of them fall under "ending abruptly with a notice that it will be continued later."

They get bored, so they slap a "Part 1" label on it and call it a day? That leads me to wonder why they'd even publish it at all. It's not like there's a deadline. Maybe it's just the perfectionist in me, but I wouldn't be able to stand publishing something I didn't feel was finished.

I feel the exact same way. All of those Part 1's and "To be continued..." endings kill me on the inside.

Please don't publish the game if you got bored while writing it. If the story bores the author, than it'll definitely being boring to the reader.

An idea

Let's allow storygames to be declared as chapters only if their length is at least 5-6. Otherwise there is no good reason for it, only many drawbacks.

Really? Tell that to Snow.

I take it that you meant the "Snow" storygame.

Is the "Snow" declared as a chapter 1 of a series? No? Then what does is it have to do with "(Chapter 1, Part 1)" thread and my idea?

Really.

I should have written "declared as a part 1 of a series", because you might've confused it with editor chapters. But from the thread context it should be rather obvious.

Oh, sorry,  I thought you meant games.