Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate that you took the time to write this up. I'm a big fan of unforeseen/far-reaching consequences to actions in stories, but I failed to give the reader any sense of control. Even a blurb in the description would have been helpful. In any case, I'll be incorporating the feedback that I've been receiving and finishing the story, hopefully by the end of the month. It'd be nice to actually include the major plot points this time around. I hope that everyone who played through already will take the time to go through it again when it's finished.
As far as future projects, you can look forward to my upcoming Love & Dating game, amongst other unannounced titles such as nopeeking! and its prequel (which will be released first) nodontlook!