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Ok this story is growing way longer than I initially expected it to be but its coming out fine. I just finished my 170th page and now I need some feedback. Can anyone help me out here? I can add you as a coauthor so you can tell me what you think. I haven't finished any major endings yet but the story is still coming out fine, in my opinion.

http://www.chooseyourstory.com/story/Decisions_Amidst_Blood_and_Glory.aspx

Here's a way to read it if you don't want to scroll through 170 pages trying to figure out what each one links to :)

ok or you could do that... I guess PM me comments? ty Bo

If you don't want people to be able to read your story while it's unpublished, make sure to uncheck 'sneak preview' in the game properties page :)

it been a while now just wondering is this gonna be a game or a novel?

also an update would be much appreciated.