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10 years ago

I started working on a CYOA that i called Raydion here on the site. I am at my first branching of the story and i wanted to get some feedback on the story so far before continuing so i could change things before it got to complicated. I whould also appreciate if someon could tell me how to allow people to view unpublished games

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10 years ago

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Raydion.aspx

bam, everyone can view your story now. :P

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10 years ago

Huh, the beggining (and the initial branch) is remarkably similar to eternal

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10 years ago

Seems like a decent start - keep going (even if it's similar to other stories here on the site)    :)