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Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Anyone wanna be a coauthor in my advanced RPG?

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Give me more information on the plot and stuff like that, and I might be interested.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Also, this belongs in writing workshop since you're asking for coauthors and not for help on advanced variables. I could be wrong, but I think I'm pretty sure this time. (Sorry about the double post, I didn't tag the mods in the first post and they won't get a notification if I just edit their names in.)

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Kinda like Skyrim, in a way. You can play as many races: Goblin, Human, Ogre, ect.

There are also classes: Warrior, Warlock, Animal Specialist, etc.

And Subclasses: Herbal healer, Tinkerer, etc.

You explore a vast world, completing missions and killing beasts. Awesome bosses, as well!

I need coauthors to help me and make my game popular!

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Hm...I guess I'm still interested. Sure, I'll be a coauthor.

Coauthors don't make your game popular though, just saying. The quality of your game will make it popular. I mean, unless they're high profile people like Endmaster, Steve or Will...or any of the other great writers here. But otherwise, your coauthors won't make your game popular.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

gotta go. will talk later. Thanks, by the way. Message me about any ideas, please!smiley

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Okay ^^;

And no problem. I am just here to make sure the story is of enough quality to publish anyways xD

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago
As per usual, I would highly recommend you start with a smaller storygame first to make sure you can do that. Many people come here saying they're going to make this massive storygame that everyone will love as their first project, and none of them ever finish it.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

My first storygame actually wasn't that bad.

Then I ruined my reputation with my second storygame that was pretty terrible, yet somehow escaped the purge by some incredible freak accident :3

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago
Pretty sure "not that bad" and "massively popular and complex" aren't the same, lol. A big mistake new authors make is trying to create the next best thing and quickly getting overwhelmed.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

True(I don't think I read your first post properly xD).
I believe there are a few stories on here that were their author's first stories here that were pretty amazing.
But I guess it depends on the person. :)

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

What's the plot/setting of your story? I like the concept of it, but it can't be a storygame without the story.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

It's a fun storygame where you can pick a race: Goblin, Human, orc, etc.

You can pick a class: Warrior, Warlock, Mage, etc.

You can unlock subclasses: Herbal healer, Necromancer, etc.

You explore a vast world, killing monsters, completing quests, buy items, crafting crap, etc.

Wanna join?

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago
That's not a plot, nor a setting.

Plot: the main events of a play, novel, movie, or similar work, devised and presented by the writer as an interrelated sequence.

Setting: the place or type of surroundings where something is positioned or where an event takes place.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Setting: A fantasy world filled with monsters and creatures. Overworld, Underworld, Underground, Heavens.

Plot: You are a reincarnated hero, trying to learn your past and help people.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago
That's better :)

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

any ideas? im sticking you down as a co-author.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago
I usually get ideas as I write, so.. :P

But, yeah, I have a few ideas depending on how the story goes.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Since I'm the only one here with a future in writing quality literature (including @Killa_Robot as he doesn't sem to be making new stories), I will endow upon you the diegesis you so utterly require. You're welcome.

Before the Story starts:

The hero spent his life as the member of a rebellion, crusading against the corrupt empires of the age. These monarchies would recruit and enslave the most dreadful creatures of the land to do their bidding and fight their wars. In all of this, human life was threatened, so the hero single-handedly formulated a coalition to subdue these thrones and bring salvation to the people of these lands. He required the aid of the greatest warriors and those with the ability to tame the fearsome beasts. Time passed, allowing the hero's coalition to develop to a formidable army of the land's greatest fighters and monsters. Their battle force seemed unstoppable until the monarchies realized it was time to form together and crush this foe once and for all. The empires resolve their differences, agree to bind, and propose one consolidated force that, in an awe-inspiring battle for the ages, destroyed the hero's awesome regiment.

As the Story starts:

Wizards of the highest caliber were recruited to manipulate the mind of the leader that was the hero, but the resolve of the hero was too resilient. In the end, he managed to escape, but felt his memory slipping away. The beloved hero came to lose his memory and after a matter of decades, his name was banished from the empire, and his legacy forgotten. In a cruel twist of irony, he ended up joining the ranks of the empire's military as its reach expanded. He is now required to do the deeds (fighting monsters, collecting cash) he once fought to abolish.

The Main Arc of the Story:

Fortunately, there are those in the villages who still believe in this hero, however aged he may be, and as such, the faithful people one day take the burden of restoring him to his former glory. To do this, they hire the help of his former allies (the ones who have survived). Assassins were enlisted to kidnap him when convenient. Medics were hired with the intent to heal him after his battle. Warlocks were called upon to help him restore his memory. With enough help and faith, the people were sure they would receive their great savior again and be able to destroy the empire once and for all!

Use that as the starting basis for your story. And no, I will not be co-authoring your story.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Well, there were only 16 mistakes in this, no matter how many times I went over it so you actually might have a pretty good future in literature.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

lol

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

I am being serious. I am a very thorough person when looking for mistakes.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

What'chu talking bout? That script was error-free.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

i saw errors too, Mr. IMbetterTHANeveryone

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

That's Prof. I'm BetterThanEveryone to you.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

hahaha.

Im gonna be an author in my future life. Wanna review a story?

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

yeah why not

pm  me

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

So, how's the story reviewing going? Can I add my story into the list of stories being reviewed? WAIT. KAIN, CAN I SEE YOUR STORY?

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Sure... if you send me yours!

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

>~<

Fine.

WARNING: THIS STORY IS TERRIBLE AND SHOULD NEVER HAVE BEEN WRITTEN. I HAVE ALSO NEVER PROOFREAD IT. GOOD LUCK. THERE ARE A TOTAL OF AROUND 500 ERRORS IN IT ...And I mean just the first chapter...I should probably correct them but I'm too lazy.

I believe I've killed them with my terrible story. They've gone oddly quiet.

Further research on these matters must be done.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

its called BEHIND THE BARS.

I know there are a lot of errors and crap, but enjoy!

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

ok. Its called Behind The Bars.

I know there are a lot of mistakes, but enjoy!

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago
"including @Killa_Robot as he doesn't sem to be making new stories"

But... I just published one four months ago...

And another is on preview as I'm testing it.

:(

(Admittedly Inepta Academy has been down for modifications for like a month now so I guess nothing currently published is recent.)

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

What happened to your previous two published games?

Were you the guy who posted the 'combat test' clickfest, that contained no writing and iirc was broken anyhow?

I have such high expectations for this game.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Oh, i thought you said clickfest, from my cookie tap game. That combat test aint mine.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Oh right, you did the other clicky thing. That was terrible too.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Well, I'm going to help with editing and maybe I'll write something ^-^

The combat test one was Tinyterd10, I think. If I'm thinking of the right story at least.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

I still remember the tear filled messages of rage that you sent me over my review of... That clicky click game that you made. Lel.

Hopefully you matured enough to handle criticism of whatever you may publish next. ^-^

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

have anger problems. i know. i working on it. sorry for a bein' a @#$%. Hope you like the new one coming out.

Anyone wanna help me make my ADVANCED RPG

7 years ago

Sure! I'll be looking forward to the next potential storygame from you.