Hi I am new here and I hope you guys will like my new story!
Hi! The advice as always is to read and learn/lurk in order to understand what the required quality is and how to improve your storygames.
As for your "story", I had a quick look at it. Just a quick warning: if one really wanted to play Fortnite, they'd go and play the game. Turning a storygame into a meagre battle royale simulator doesn't make much sense and won't be appreciated.
oh okay. what should i write a story about then
Well, you shouldn't really be asking me this question. You don't have to write a story; write one only if you want to, if you like an idea and want to develop it into a storygame. There's no rush or time limit. In the meantime, as I said, you could read some stories (both on this site and in real books); those you've read will add to your imagination and help you think about new ones.
Okay. then I'll write a star wars story. I didnt know Im sorry.
thank you I will try my best!