I need help making a good story game any suggestions
Have it be intellectually stimulating, exciting, design your characters so that the reader can care about them and what happens to them and make the story as interactive as you can without damaging the plot.
Also, take your time. Don't rush out a story in a day. Length may not guarantee success, but if the story is too short then the reader will never be able to connect properly with the characters.
True length doesn't mean success, if your story is too long without stimulating characters and a good story and plot many people would just quit without finishing it. (I would think.)
thanks for the advice