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We were so preoccupied with whether we could, we didn't stop to think about whether we should. 

I-I tried telling you not to publish it when you showed it to me! 

*sniffles* 

What have you all done!? 

Oh Bucky, you kidder. Putting me down as a co-author. So funny!

What is this, a dragon story? I've never heard of such a thing but I'm sure you worked very hard on singlehandedly writing it. Kiel will be so proud.

Also, we were just following orders. 

What the fark? It's 8/8.....

Why wouldn't it be?

And Mason, you probably could have submitted all your contribution as its own story.

Lol, nah. I'm saving my wiriting for a big one. I'd much rather have one story that takes a couple years to write than a bunch of short stories that take a few months. I'm kind of nervous about it.....

Thanks, Bucky.

Yes, really, that was a lot of pages. Mason, I think you've found your calling.

Damn't, Mizal, you've made me linger back to touching my 'relic' games. 

It was so good that I left two reviews!  (Mainly because I found my first one to be factually wrong.) Oh well, I'll definitely have fun with reading this over and over again. 

My personal favorite was the god Mizal and Bucky. Who wrote that? I'm expecting Buck.

Yes.

Just relishing in the fact that I made Larry-Boy Mk. II squirm so much he had to comment on his own story to try and defuse mine.  I should shit-post more often.

TBH, was pretty fun, even if there were wasted opportunities in Psychological Warfare and Practical Assaults.  Favored the Religion one heavily, if only to distract myself from how glaringly 8th grade Sorcery felt.  

Addendum : Would've felt like a real 7/8 if you guys went all Eli Wiesel on the dwarf segments.

You should find something better to relish, mate. Life is full of wonders, and   if you're masturbating over how people are "lol so salt", you haven't experienced very many of them. 

Malkie's saying something generic and non-flammatory?  *Unzips*Can't disagree to that.

Nevermind.

@Nevermind

So who is Larry-Boy Mk I?

And when I did a half assed search on Larry-Boy all I could find was something about VeggieTales, so I’m guessing this is another one of those young people references I’m not getting due to being of great old age.

I have no idea, but it's a little disturbing if there's a Veggie Tales character that can be compared to Malk. I feel like parents should complain.

I did get a chuckle out of Swyft's review though. The story felt...uneven? Unfinished? Even...rushed? You don't say!  

It does sound like she hit the Citadel link while it was broken, though.

Mk I was another user on another forum Malk and I were in. Malk came here when I posted the link to here.

I have no idea who you're talking about. The only people I remember are you, Thin, and 5x Pi 

@Bucky will try it again.

It's impossible to pass all the classes, right?

I was just about to ask who wrote the village assault path.

I tried to clear all the classes just to see if I could, but five of them are left. Village Assault, Dragon Sorcerer, Philosophy, Aerial Assault and High Society which would loop back to the class list but wouldn’t actually go away.

I wondered if that was Ax, since it didn’t look anything like the rest of the story and the writing style wasn't as familiar.

And it looks like Philosophy does loop back, but it’s a bit unconventional since there’s a path where you technically die, but get sent back to the start instead of ending the story.

Oh, yeah, I decided to contribute right before the deadline, so I didn't actually read any of the rest of it before writing mine. But I feel that's in keeping with the spirit of this collaboration, really.

Still say it's a damn shame that dragon didn't find one of your old NaNo novels while crying in the bathroom...

Trust me, no one wants to read those.

I didn't know we were making them disappear, mine just loops back to the courses page.

Is the idea to put some kind of...let's call it an 'ending' in if all the courses are completed? That seems strange and confusing but I'm not entirely opposed to such a novel idea.

Castle Assault bumps it back up to 5/8.

I remember reading it a while back. It was absolutely hilarious, I'm sad to see it go. I'm not sure that the subject matter would be about dragons, but I really like the idea of ADS; a collaborative story made by 5 or more people. Maybe another one could be hosted here, with only trusted members being allowed to join? Not officially or even posting a thread garnering people's attention, just by PMing anybody who might be interested.

Thanks for the advice, but I don't know if I'll attempt this since I'm not good with working with people and someone else would most likely be more competent at it than me. Nevertheless, I have a question; who do you think/know would be interested in something like this, aside from the people who worked on ADS?

Well, that makes me sad.