Hi. Everyone who read my first ever story-game Jack and Jill Live On knows that it sucked. However, I have written the second part to the series, which is longer and hopefully better.
So please read it and comment! :)
well.... it was... meh...
Post these kind of threads in the parlor room next time. The Mods will move it there soon though, so no need of reposting the thread. :)
It was written OK, but just too dang short.
I suggest copying and pasting the whole thing into your new game and plugging it in at the start, then deleting the old one - and also adding at least 10 times the content to your next one...
We really rate shorty short short stories poorly around here...
Don't do episodic story games, just publish it as one whole thing, or at least release each part and then a complete version afterwards.
Thanks for all your comments!
Moved to Parlor Room.
Where is the sequel anyways