According to the articles I read about well, story creation, it's a bad idea to open stories with dialogue. Opening CYOAs with dialogue are tricky, but I unfortunately started my last minute chaos entry (which I still have 2 days to complete) with dialogue. I would like opinions about this matter such as if it's a good idea to create an opening with dialogue.
I started my story with rumors about the delinquent protagonist that started the chaos in my story which in this case, is a famine and a tiny amount of backstory to the place where the story takes place in. It should tell the plot of the story so I don't need to write the plot overview. I suppose I should show you what I wrote since you bothered to click this thread so here:
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"Have you heard about the infamous delinquent in school? I think her name was... Skye the Fly?" asks Craneo, one of the nerds; one of the four archetypes in school. The nerds seem weak and frail, but they have their hand at technology and brains.
"Rumor has it that she caused the nuclear war indirectly, the Skye family is influential in Twinbrook, particularly in the A-C sector." says Lan Fan, another nerd in the group.
"Why were the sectors divided though?" asks Medusa, a fit female jock. Jocks are often obsessed with the latest sports gear and staying fit is the way to survive, just like survival of the fittest. "Shouldn't we work together to survive the nuclear famine?"
"Well, we have to figure out whose friend and foe, that's why we have to create secto-" replies Craneo, immediately stopping once he sees a student blocking the way to school.
That mysterious student is extremely intimidating, appearing as the group turned into a corner. She has a crowbar in her hand, and she appears to have a fit stature. From their faces, it could be assumed that they were going to be ambushed, so Lan Fan grabs a crowbar from her pocket. Before she could attack the intruder, someone in the group shouts.
"Oh no, it's... Sky The Fly!?!" says Craneo, preparing his body to run, but Medusa blocks his way.
"Are you seriously letting us girls to fight her alone? I guess that means that you're just a coward, Craneo."
The mysterious girl opens up her mouth to speak, taking a step forward. "What were you sayin' about me? Rumors fit you Craneo, you're not able to confirm them without evidence, AND SO SHOULD BE YOUR VERY EXISTENCE!"
"I like her already," says Medusa