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13 days ago

Hey I was just wondering if someone would want to play test my game and point out everything I am doing wrong? :)

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13 days ago

I wouldn't mind ^-^

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13 days ago

Okay so focus mainly on the first page and the backstory page.

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13 days ago
You're... you're asking for a playtest for two pages?

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13 days ago

I think if someone playtests my first two pages I can use the feedback to help me write the whole story.

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13 days ago

That's not how it works. The first two pages could have problems completely different from problems other parts of the story have. The feedback you get from a small part of a story cannot determine what the pros and cons of a whole, complete story are.

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13 days ago

But what if I have not finished my story yet? I have only written three pages and want to know what I can do better while writing the rest of the story.

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13 days ago

My point is, it's better to have someone read more than two pages of your story for feedback.

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13 days ago

So what should I do?

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13 days ago

Write a good percentage of it. 

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13 days ago

Okay I will do that.

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13 days ago

Just add Seto as a co-author, and he can go behind you as you write to correct anything you mess up.

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13 days ago

Is that okay with you seto?

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13 days ago

@Seto

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13 days ago

That works ^-^
Just tell me when you finished another page.

I'll edit any grammar/spelling mistakes first, then send you the feedback of the page in a pm.

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12 days ago

It's done.

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13 days ago

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-power-of-magic