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Hello people. This is my very first story. Um... You can check the pilot-teaser on my prolife and share your comments in here.

The Writing Workshop is typically where you post for advice or feedback on unfinished stuff, this section is for sharing stories and art, etc.

What you have so far looks okay and got a couple of chuckles out of me, but it's hard to give any serious feedback when there's only a couple of pages so far. (Though it's nice to see Steve has a fan...)

You don't need to worry about adding End Game links to anything in your profile BTW. Save those for the actual branch endings as you add to the game. I don't think it's possible to comment on unpublished stories that way anymore anyhow, and you wouldn't want people rating an unfinished game either way.