Anybody willing to Beta-Read my book Cabata's Quest/give me notes (in exchange for the same)?
I've had a few friends read it already; and, amongst other things, it still needs polishing/rewriting... but would love any advise/feedback on the structure/flow of the game etc. before I release it to the educated masses (ie publish it on this site).
Thanks in advance for anyone willing to take a look! :-)