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Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

I want to make a furry dating simulator. The rating is mature. Is this okay or should I shut it down before it gets to crazy?

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Its too degenerate. Also no.

Mature content isnt allowed here in general, but your idea makes me weep for humanity.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Go for it, nobody should depreciate your creativity without having read it first. good luck have fun

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

As long as you let the scalies have some fun too, I'm sure you'll be fine.  :D

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Please, tell us all about your plot.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

I’m pretty sure it’s porn, so the plot will be outstanding.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

I just want to point you towards two resources:

  1. CYS Website Guidelines
  2. Minimum Site Standards for Storygames

As such, theoretically, the story 'idea' (if you can even call it that) can work. I'd say there are many potential pitfalls, but you aren't asking about that, and besides, it might just be me who would struggle making such a storygame.

At any rate, knock yourself out, at the very least it will be a good learning experience.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Is it possible to get too crazy with that topic?

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

Goes onto CHOOSE your STORY and decides....

"Each choice doesn’t really affect the story, but you can get different reactions from each person with different actions. There is no story to this."

 

 

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

Get ready for hot furries having sex!

Also literally everything a story on this site shouldn't be! Fuck you you little furry cog sucking piece of shit.  Go write for COG, sounds like they could have a good fap to this you oozy punt discharge licking sicko!

 

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
I'm not sure if a game where you can only date girls would do well at COG at all, and also gross, don't be a 2017-era Steve.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
If its not just straight up porn and if its written to a competent (and really, just competent) standard, then go right ahead, write what you enjoy!

I'd like to see more romance stories on the site (I like the genre) and something as superficial as if the characters have tails or not really isn't going to detract from a nicely written game.

But seriously, put some effort into it, and remember that sexually explicit or otherwise 'mature' content can't be used as a crutch for poor characters, plot, grammar, etc, etc. If there's one thing this site hates more than bad stories, it's bad stories with talking animals.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Now it’s time to choose your girl!



Rebecca the raccoon always wants to dig deeper. Her booty is so hot you could light a fire.



Danielle the duck has a passion for grooming. Her feathers are always ready to be ruffled.



Henrietta the hare loves to bite those carrots. She’ll always dog deeper where food is concerned.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
You used dig deeper twice, you think a slight mis-spelling would stop me from noticing the pathetic effort spent on coming up with those puns!?

Also, I chose Danielle since she's the only one with a hobby.

Rebecca wants a hole to shit in and Henrietta wants to eat food, wooo, they sound amazing.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Those were actual quotes lol, you'll have to take your pun criticisms up with the OP.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
*local man yells at clouds*

I can't believe you got me to waste my complainin' time on WIP puns.

Also, god bless OP for being brave enough to have sneak preview on. A hero to us all.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

Welcome to Aubur

This is your town. What’s left of it, anyway. After that massive lightning storm last year, most people moved away. They wanted nothing to do with all the craziness happening here. Freak tornados, flash floods, and random lightning strikes are the least of your problems now. With that lighting came the disease. Outbreaks of people going on killing sprees randomly. Sometimes, half a town killed by one dude with a shotgun. Now, self defense is everyone’s first concern. But with more and more people getting infected each day, people started to buy guns of their own. Nobody roams the streets and the population is slowly dying. You only worried for your own safety when your neighbor went beserk, killing his wife and two kids before hanging himself from the tree in his backyard. You know he was a hunter so he had a few guns in his basement.

     You know your sister is somewhere out there, but you’re not sure where. Contacting her could be hard, but worth it. A partner during all this could be useful.

     There’s always a chance your local gun store hasn’t been raided yet and you could get a gun, but that would mean leaving the safety of your house. You hear a few gunshots already, so that should be your last resort.

     Your girlfriend from school is also still out there, seeing as she posted a picture of herself on Instagram not too long ago. You know her address, but she’s across the city and your car is out of gas. A gun could help there.

And at that, it’s all up to you. What will you do?

So far THIS looks more promising, and you're wasting your time with furfag degeneracy.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Can you fuck the sister tho?

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Only if she catches that disease.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

Hmm, it seems this one actually does have SOME potential.  However the Aubur storygame description could use some work.  Not sure why they always have to be like "duur, this is random and there is some bad shit in here so be careful kiddos" (there are ways to do this without sounding dumb, but most fail at this horribly)

If people can't pay attention to the maturity rating thats what they get if they read a story with booty-hole eating zombies or people offing their families before roping.  

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
I identify as an agender attack possum, please make sure there are dating options for me too.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Sebastian best boy.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

You should repent for your sins.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

So what's the estimated completion date?

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago

Wow, big surprise, the noob throws a "controversial" story idea causing several people to answer and this fucktard never bothers to come back to his own thread and I know he's logged in recently.

Banning this faggot sometime tomorrow for wasting everyone's fucking time if he doesn't fucking answer.

EDIT: Done.

Is this idea too...faggy? (Yes)

5 years ago
Welp, looks like he didn't care to do an incredibly simple thing to save his account.