Today paragraphs are trickier for me, This is a scene I made previously and I tried to fix by myself. And I am not really sure, If I know how to do it by myself, so I ask f is this correct
STORY
"You are an interesting case, truly remarkable. Coming from a cougar lineage, solely focused on the creation of as many spies as possible, To point be considered a social imperative of your clan. You decided to choose a scientific route, even if focused on martial science, Believe me when I say that decision required a very strong will and self-esteem.
"It was tough, yes" you whisper more for yourself that to Tea. Your memories since a small cub were all about your parents trying to make of you the perfect warrior. Hours upon hours they were training you further and furthermore to be the perfect Cougar genetic enhanced human.
Nobody cared about my feelings about the matter. You still struggling to cope with how they left you alone in the 3,000 years old derelict bunker 100 km away from home when you were only ten years old. And to your own devices finding away out.
"It was a tough childhood, yes. But, Then I found the amazing world of The fallen empire relics, and their robots"'
You stop talking about your family drama issues with your father disdain for your anti cougar like the decision of "being a lab rat"
"The military scientific program It was my only way to get what I want to accomplish."
'I am not judging your decision. Far from it, Lieutenant. However, choices are what shapes everyone and everything Destiny" There is a fatalism in their tone and deep sadness, as they were their last words.
They pick a strange metallic insignia from their luxurious pouch, a blue faintly neon light flickering softly from it. Soon, the noble place it on your chest and all-around both of you suddenly get paralysed and dark, like all light is being drained from the universe.
"We haven't much time. This device creates a bubble wrap around our dimension making absolutely impossible being mon
"Someone had been sabotaging The Mufasa the last year and giving important intel to the enemies. In fact, The station defence 5 attack arose because someone from this ship has been sending strategy data from the station and your team's weaponry and composition. The fact that you were able to get from it alive and well was certainly not in their plans."
"Most of the leaks, originated when you weren't on board and the level of the access needed...Means only Captain Salazar Skar could be the mole"
"Holly feline" "Fucking bastard!!" You say without even thinking about your reality is being torn down.
"Temper your fury. The Feline tribe dire needs you to succeed in your next mission. We also suspect than one of your own new team members is another traitorous octopus spy. But it was so sudden to discerning who is the enemy".
Tea moves graciously even with their cripple leg and puts their front paw over your shoulder. In a clear gesture of empathy. " You can do this. We the Congress trust in you Lieutenant. And If you are successful. A brave new world will open for a young cougar like you. Now is time to burst this temporary bubble. The insignia will allow me to communicate with you during your mission."
The room and time return to normality, as nothing out of the box has happened the chat turns friendly and created an image of normalcy.
Soon the Captain makes the call to start the briefing. Tea solemnly adds "Choices are what shapes everyone and everything. The Destiny" There is a fatalism in their tone and deep sadness, as those were their last words.