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Land of Spectrum

4 years ago

Currently I am working on a story about a land called spectrum where all of the kingdoms are based off of the color spectrum. You follow a dude named Pete after he wakes up in the middle of the woods with no memory besides his name. And then based on the selection of the reader he gets into all sorts of different adventures or screws things up.

Land of Spectrum

4 years ago
It's hard to comment on this without more detail, but do you have a backstory of how he got there and any specific resolutions in mind? Just pointing out that "guy has amnesia, idk" is one of those cliches of the genre you may want to avoid.

"All sorts of different adventures" could cover a lot of things of course. I'd advise not attempting anything too expansive for your first story, but of course the most important thing is that you have fun with it.