Wow... somehow, I ended up getting the exact same ending that I got the first time I played this game, a million years ago! I guess I was so caught up in the story I didn't even notice! The writing is PERFECT--not too long and redundant, but with enough detail to keep you hooked--the choices are good, and, overall, I'd say this is definitely the best horror game on the site!
That was a true under-the-covers story. I play so many game centric games that I forget what a story-centric games like this feel like. Of course, being a story-centric game, it is a bit disheartening to see a few typos and seemingly random occurrences, but it's easy to forgive those.
This game is fantastic. It's in the classic "choose your own adventure" format, is exciting, well written, and has an original (scary!) story. Very impressive. Congrats.
Without question one of the best stories on the site. Extremely well written, creative plot, great descriptions, and enough choices. Miccy - waddya mean, quality over quantity? The quality is impeccable, and it IS a story. You're supposed to read, not just click through a bunch of two sentence pages. Excellent work, please write more!
I passed it by clicking back whenever I died. I am sure the story wasn't that bad, but nobody likes it when every page in the game takes forever to read. Quality over quantity next time.
-- Miccy2000
2/8/2006 4:22:55 AM:
This game is THE best I've ever played
-- Tidus
7/19/2005 8:05:25 PM:
That was excellent, and it should definitely be featured. It was written very well, and should be appealing to any sort of adventure gamer. You should wrote more, it was great fun!
-- Mina
4/19/2005 3:12:25 AM:
Nice ending! I finally understand the wole thing about Mr. Alexander. I played this once before, but I died early on. Really nice story, and very suspenseful.
-- Badger
4/14/2005 12:20:48 AM:
bit more finished, with some definate endings, but still a couple of loose ends to clean up! great story though like I said. Take some time to finish it pleease. post on the message board if you need some advice at any time. Great story yuna.
-- march5th00
3/20/2005 7:29:06 PM:
Totally awesomne game! Just great! Wonderful! Completely awesome!
-- The Master Survivor
2/17/2005 6:10:56 PM:
I don't like leaving unfinished games category featured. Please finish this game, or it'll have to be removed. Hope you're still around. This game has crazy potential and is beautifully written. but there are dead links, and there's nothing more annoying... well almost nothing. Great game, just finish it!!
-- march5th00
2/16/2005 9:23:53 PM:
this is the second time ive read this story and i have to say im still impressed. this has got to be the most intense and suspenseful story on this site. please finish it though, those bad links are killing this game.
-- nate
1/11/2005 2:36:19 PM:
This could be one of the best games on the site if it was finished
-- choco2
3/2/2004 2:44:50 PM:
it's a great story! I loved it! I just love it when people on this site make complete sentances, and don't use alot of slang. the only problem with it was that there are some links that just lead to a "new page" page. anyways, it's a great story, so keep it up!
-- kassia
10/19/2003 2:20:03 PM:
I'm sorry i just clicked buttons did i win!
-- Julious Jay Bradford
10/14/2003 5:42:49 PM:
Very nicely written. The descriptions evoke appropriate feelings of dread. It's a short game, but challenging and quite fun! I enjoyed playing through it.
-- DuckandCover
9/11/2003 11:32:18 AM:
Not too bad, but you'll want to finish off the dead pages.
-- Freebooter
9/10/2003 9:13:18 AM:
Cool very long it must have token you a while it was good from a scale of 1 to 10 i give it a 7 but come pages wernt done.
-- Golden
9/6/2003 4:22:57 PM:
This is a very intriguing story, but there are a few links that are missing. Finish this and this game will be one of the more scary stories on here.