I loved the premise of this game. And I really liked how you gave the readers a list of definitions that you used throughout the game. I think you should go back and fix some of your grammar mistakes though because they are kind of bothersome. Once you fix them, this story will be really great.
Love the story, but it seems less detailed than it could be and the large number of spelling and grammatical errors do diminish it, unfortunately. Nevertheless, excellent sci fi story. I'd like to see a more extensive version of this. I can see where there's some educational factors in it, but mostly I view it as a good story using the archetypes, not a story specifically to explain those archetypes. Good work!
Probably my favorite story so far, definitely brings me enlightenment! I had a look at a bit more background on Jung's theories!
Loved the philosophical meanings behind your story too, reminds me definitely of "Animal Farm", and "A Handmaid's Tale" (Margaret Atwood). Yeah, it's quite horrible to see an intended Utopia such as this actually being a Dystopia. The labelling of the "Cretins" also reminds me of eugenics.
Just a few downsides: you could try to shorten or leave spaces between paragraphs, as it quickly becomes tiring to read.
-- 9_Ice_Sabres (Score of 530)
8/2/2009 12:05:34 PM:
I've always loved this game. Anyone who has a hard time understanding psychology (like me) should play it at least once on the site... preferably more.
Great concept for a game exploring the possible dangers of artificial intelligence(computers) over the human race. Im giving this and 8 definetly, but its not like i find it totally perfect. The numerous speeling mistakes could be imrpove and some parts of the story could be explained in further detail, overall a marvellous game.
JHA flows very nicely and is an entertaining read as well. Numerous spelling and grammar errors did distract from the fun a bit, but that should be an easy fix for the author. Thumbs up!
-- ktankerous (Score of 540)
1/14/2007 12:57:38 AM:
Needs much spelling and grammar checking -- I found this to detract from the story at times. The story is well conceived though -- thumbs up!
-- Mixelplek (Score of 530)
1/13/2007 2:33:34 PM:
I haven't rated many games yet, but I do feel that this one was outstanding. It was extremely interesting and even suspenseful too. I really identified with the character and some of the moral decisions were challenging ones which carried logical (if sometimes unexpected) consequences. At the end I was given the message "for an even better ending do [such and such--I can't give it away!]" and I definitely *will* play this one again and explore the alternative story line.
I will give this game a perfect rating if/when the author goes back and runs the text of each page through MS Word or some other spelling and grammar checker. Right now there are hundreds of spelling and grammar errors--I'm talking approximately one error for every one or two sentences. I found the story itself so well done that I could get past this problem without undue frustration or distraction. Still, imagin
Contains many mechanical errors, but was very, VERY enjoyable. I concur with the pucky18 person who left the last comment that this is better than many published novels, much better. However, it may need a little more work...
It contains may mechanical errors, but was very enjoyable anyway. About Jung, though: wouldn't becoming one with your anima bring (ultimately) misery? 8/8
That was a terrific game. It was such an awesome story. Seriously,I'm not trying to demote the site or anything but forget the site, just drag the story on a bit longer and make a novel out of it. I'd buy it. It's a good storyline. Well done. 8/8.
The poor grammar and syntax are easily overshadowed by the knowledge imparted and evident creative spark. Enthralling and disturbing. Very Orwellian as you mentioned. Jung is an interesting creature, ever looked at Beck? Great job chocobot.
-- madglee (Score of 530)
7/10/2006 11:47:10 AM:
it definately brought me enlightenment. great game. though there was a dead link and i didnt like having to go back so much.
-- nate (Score of 30)
7/6/2006 10:29:27 PM:
a very great and individual game
-- mwan14 (Score of 530)
6/27/2006 11:11:39 PM:
Great game Choco. I got a Great Ending and a Great Middle and a Great Beggining. Altogether it's great great great.
-- Havacoman (Score of 530)
6/20/2006 4:06:22 PM:
An amazing game! It's so neat that you managed to mix Jungian psycology with science fiction!
-- somerandomperson (Score of 530)
5/16/2006 4:57:02 PM:
Excellent and nicely done!
-- GodsSlayer (Score of 530)
4/11/2006 9:01:17 PM:
Great Gane!!!!
Started off great, ended greated. Best Scifi game on the site. My new favorite MAG game.
-- ExiledPheonix (Score of 530)
3/26/2006 10:23:08 AM:
A bit of a bore to read, but I liked the story. It could have a bit more interaction, and less writing (I am here to play, not read) but it was good.
-- Miccy2000 (Score of 540)
2/10/2006 2:45:14 AM:
BEST SF game on the site! make a sequel! pleeaase?
-- Rommel (Score of 530)
1/14/2006 3:41:14 AM:
Great Liturature, very, very good.
-- JJJ (Score of 530)
10/28/2005 1:02:07 AM:
I won with the good ending. Now for talk about the game. I don't play favorites but yours is AWESOME! I've finally played all of your games and boy, is this a grand finaly! I loved IT!
-- Al (Score of 30)
5/14/2005 11:18:35 PM:
Oh... my... God! I have seen so many other wonderful, brilliant games on this website: Holloween, Holloween II, Jurrasic Fairview Park, September the 14th, the Wal-Mart Game, fine gems of creativity, every one! But this... THIS... this is electric gold in digital form! This is the most transcendent of all adventure games! You can't even call yourself a choose-your-own-adventure game player until you've played this!
-- Isaiah the Future Hero (Score of 540)
2/17/2005 10:04:25 PM:
That was a great story,overall. Highly imaginative and creative use facts. Can't wait to see the full edited version.
-- sincuirge (Score of 530)
2/7/2005 3:29:09 PM:
Nice game. Very symbolic. On the first chapter I thought this game is insane and how is it related to Jung. But soon I understand what was going on.
-- Siti (Score of 550)
9/12/2004 11:49:03 AM:
pretty damn good....although I killed the brother
-- Chris (Score of 30)
5/27/2003 1:47:15 AM:
Cool game
-- Paul (Score of 530)
2/9/2003 11:46:14 AM:
I have played three of these stupid games in my boredom and have to say that this game is actually pretty good. All these games however need more options. The game is really not that much about Jungian psychology; it seems to get away from it rather succesfully....
-- soror mystica (Score of 530)
11/23/2002 2:00:10 AM:
Reminds me of those futuristic movies about censorship and totalitarianism. Good work!
-- Kid Narc (Score of 530)
10/6/2002 9:00:07 PM:
hey great game george! I especially liked the pages that went from when those guys with the scarabs entered till pretty much the end! it kept me enthralled, but did i have to really lose my hand?? gross..