The few typos and grammatical errors are a tiny, almost insignificant gripe when it comes to this story. I got the "Godhood?" ending which took me by surprise and was a nice blindsided twist I thought. A very smart, well written story all around.
Amazing game. It kept me interested while at the same time being harder than most others. My thoughts on this game is that it could use some work on the spelling and grammar errors, but other than that it is a well written, near perfect game.
Probably the third time I've read this story (though clearly my first time rating), and really, I just like it more each time I read it and see how many different paths (and endings!) really are available. Excellent work. Keep it up!
Alas for the temptress...indeed the mighty have fallen. My "girlfriend's" advice about allies was, apparently, not specific to this. If at first you don't succeed...
This is the best thing I had ever seen, it's kinda hard sometimes but I got to the epilogue. If you read the sad parts, you are really gonna cry like a baby, this is a story with emotions dude! (No I don't smoke stuff)
That was a very good story :D I liked all the different choices you could take and all the different outcomes that happened(mine was becoming a God of Death and traveling to other dimensions :/ )
Very interesting story really well written. Though it was more story than game. The story aspect more than made up for this. It is truly a great story that I enjoyed every moment of reading.
Gotten requests for a sequel to this story several times in the past. However, it's virtually impossible to make one given the ultimate outcome. This is a story that would probably be ruined by a sequel (or prequel). I'd rather leave it be for the most part.
However, I did make an "equal" which takes place during the same events as this story, but it has a very different protagonist.
This game is the Led Zeppelin of CYS gmaes. i couldnt possibly say enough to tell how good this story is. not to mention all work pit into it. SWEAT AND BLOOD. this is a masterpiece and cant be replaced. well done
One of the things you do so well in your stories is make clearly distinguishable, and rich characters. It's almost as though you don't have a single flat character, all are well-rounded and seem fully developed from the moment they are introduced. This story is no exception.
I'm a bit dissapointed with this one, after reading Ground Zero. I guess Ground Zero was just ground breaking or something. I would have released them in opposite order, this is maybe 1/2 the game Ground Zero is in my opinion.