Briar_Rose, The Journeyman Scrivener

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10/28/2012

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11/13/2018 6:28 PM

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3410

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5

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796 wins / 435 losses

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Hi everyone! For any of you Price of Freedom readers out there, I just wanted to let you know that while, unfortunately, a sequel hasn't been published yet, there is an updated version available on dashingdon. Here's the link: https://dashingdon.com/play/averymoore/the-price-of-freedom-innocence-lost/mygame

The update includes:

The options to play as male or female.
The player gets to choose their own name.
Five stats, as opposed to the original two.
Two extra chapters.
More detailed backstory for the MC, and a lot of the other characters.

If you want to keep updated on The Price of Freedom, or any of my other games, you can follow me on social media at:

https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames/

https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Earning 1,000 Points Earning 2,000 Points Having 2 Storygame(s) Featured Won 65% of Duels For your wily assassin ways! ^v^ Given by EndMaster on 05/14/2014 - For utterly crushing all competition at the Spring Thing 2014! Given by Fleshnblood_78 on 05/29/2017 - Because I was impressed with the stuff I've read from you. Given by Will11 on 01/14/2018 - For your fantastic stories, especially Price of Freedom

Storygames

Disney Trivia Quiz

So you think you know your Lion Kings from your Little Mermaids? Take the Disney Trivia Quiz and see how much of a cartoon junkie you really are.

A very big thank you to Aman for proofreading. ^_^


Marvel Adventure

This is game that I made with my nephew. He's six years old and he really, really likes Marvel Superheroes. (I might've helped with the writing a little bit, but he came up with the stories all by himself.) ^_^


Featured Story Quest for the Holy Grail

A noble quest based on the film Monty Python's Holy Grail. This game is completely pointless and is basically me playing around with the Advanced Editor to see how it works. Hope it's fun anyway!


Featured Story The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost

You are 10 years old when you first feel the weight of shackles around your wrists. In a matter of hours, your whole world is turned upside down as you are dragged away from your home in Greece to work as a slave in the Roman Empire.
Now you must struggle for survival. Every decision you make will affect your future. Will you make friends or enemies? Will you submit to your masters or fight your every command? Will you sell your soul to earn your freedom, or sacrifice everything for the people you love? Will you even survive long enough to see the sun rise?


Tower of Riddles

Updated version, same game less spelling mistakes. Huge thanks to BerkaZerka for play-testing! ^_^

You are trapped in an medieval tower dungeon, which is never a good way to start your day. Luckily there seems to be a secret passage for you to escape through. All you have to do is solve a few riddles and you're free as a bird. Easy right? Just so long as you don't get a riddle wrong, then you die a horrible death... Good luck!

(It is definitely possible to win this game, once you figure out how.)


How To Write A Storygame
unpublished

hewo everywon!!! my nam is kittymewmew568 and i am 12! this my fist game i hop u lik my gam so r8 da game 8 out 8 an if u dont lick it ten GTFO DUN SAY NUFING BAD BOUT MY GAM MY GAM ID AWESOME SO FUK U!!!!1!!1!1

(Never read what you've written before you post it. You're a busy person, what with school and Fortnite marathons, and smashing the like button on all your favourite douchetubers and stuff. You just don't have time for trivial things like checking for spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, you should always pretend to be younger than you actually are. It'll make everybody feel sorry for you, and they'll all be really kind and understanding of your terrible writing. If that doesn't work... Just tell people how to rate your game. Let them know that they should give your game a really high rating and leave you lovely, encouraging comments, otherwise they might forget. And of course, tell all those haters to fuck off in advance. There will always be cyberbullies telling you mean and horrible things like, "you should try harder," or "37 words is a bit short for a CYS game," but fuck all of them! They're just jealous of you anyway.)


Murder at the Manor
unpublished

Four mysteries in one. A man has been murdered in his stately home in the country and you have only four suspects. Can you figure out who the killer is? Well guess again... And again... And again! Because the killer is selected at random at the beginning of every game.

Note: This game was originally made for a competition put together by Morgan R where writers had to make the best game they could in a day. Unfortunately, I didn't get the game finished in time, so never got around to publishing it, but I stumbled across it a few months later and decided it was worth finishing. So here it is, hope you enjoy ^_^


Test 2
unpublished

Hi guys! Don't bother reading this, it's not a game I'm just doing some testing to see what variables factor into game length. I'll unpublish it again soon.


The Price of Freedom
unpublished

You are 10 years old when you first feel the weight of shackles around your wrists. In a matter of hours, your whole world is turned upside down as you are dragged away from your home in Greece to work as a slave in the Roman Empire.
Now you must struggle for survival. Every decision you make will affect your future. Will you make friends or enemies? Will you submit to your masters or fight your every command? Will you sell your soul to earn your freedom, or sacrifice everything for the people you love? Will you even survive long enough to see the sun rise?


Recent Posts

Mean girls' locker room on 11/13/2018 6:23:17 PM

That's fair, but insulting people on CYS is just kind of what we do. We insult people we don't like. We insult people we do like. We insult each other and then the person who was insulted will probably say, "Is that really the best you can do? If you're going to insult me, at least put some effort into it." (What can I say? We're immature people.) cheeky


Crazy people be CRAZY!!! on 11/13/2018 5:56:16 PM

Weird, I also had a fucking crazy customer today. The queue was getting longer and one of the guys opened up a till, and the customer had a massive go at him for not opening up the till faster, then the poor guy says, "You don't have to be rude"... To which the customer blows his shit and spends the rest of his time in the shop going on about how he's going to report to head office about the terrible service. cheeky


Crazy people be CRAZY!!! on 11/13/2018 5:53:53 PM

Kissed a guy before marriage? frown


Crazy people be CRAZY!!! on 11/13/2018 5:41:16 AM

So... I stumbled across something interesting today, and figured it'd be fun for shitz and giggles to make a thread that's just dedicated to... Crazy people saying crazy things. (@Mizal, you should post something from that white woman who identifies as black. That was BEAUTIFUL!)

So anyway... Here's an example of a good, Christian woman, kindly sharing the beauty of God's eternal love and forgiveness. ^_^


What is preferred...? (Name related) on 11/13/2018 4:50:22 AM

Either's fine, but you have to take into account that it can be EXTREMELY difficult to write a game in which the protagonist's name is never mentioned. Still, Endmaster pulled it off with Eternal, so it's definitely doable. ^_^


Mean girls' locker room on 11/13/2018 4:39:50 AM

Well I hope you've learned your lesson! Taking screenshots of people's conversations so that you can make fun of them behind their backs? Seriously! You should all be ashamed of yourselves! cheeky


Stan Lee Died on 11/12/2018 6:34:19 PM

I'm sure they'll find a way to slip him in there... Maybe sneak his ashes into the back?


Stan Lee Died on 11/12/2018 6:29:12 PM

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! He was my favourite Marvel character! crying


Mean girls' locker room on 11/12/2018 11:22:55 AM

... It really, really, really was my own fault for asking. >.<


Mean girls' locker room on 11/12/2018 10:31:19 AM

Oh dear. Haven't read that yet... This is not going to be fun. >.<