xDante, The Contributor
I am new at making Storygames, but I enjoy it very much. My first published storygame was A Yearly Exam of Seaonfield High University.
My current goal is to make a few Storygames based around the world of my first one, A Yearly Exam of Seasonfield High University. I plan to only have few Storygames of the series altogether, including the first storygame. I don't wish to super clutter the website with a ton of episodes.
I'm just doing this all for fun, so if you don't like the plot concept of my Storygames, then please don't tell me so. If you have constructive criticism on my writing style and fluency, then that is great because my English skills are not very good and I enjoy learning how to write better.
(Note: This is my first story)
The plot is pretty simple and short. I got a lot of the story ideas from my weird educational nightmares.
You play as a 12.5th grade student named Ron H. He goes to the school: Seasonfield High University. The student grades range from 6-16. Everyone wears uniforms, even the teachers. All uniforms have name tags on them, labeling the student's or teacher's name. For students, the tags also labels grade. When you play as Ron, he is at the age of 17 and chooses to major in Chemistry for his educational path.
Your objective is to pass your chemistry exam.
I know that this story needs gammer and spelling corrections. If you wish to comment on what I should improve for my stories, then that would be great. I plan to come back to this story in a month or so to edit it more.
I just hope you all enjoy.
(Note: I own none of the pictures used.)
Seasonfield High University: Battles
Seasonfield High University: The Observer
This game is based on my previous game, A Yearly Exam of Seasonfield High University.
A virus has been unleased on the campus of Seasonfield High University. It makes everyone loose all of their common sense, causing everyone to kill each other.
You play as Mr Swanston, a young math teacher who worked in Seasonfield High University, before the outbreak. Now, he's locked in the school's high-tech security bunker, watching the war go on.
On the first page of the game, I give you the general background information of the world. Then the Storygame begins.
on 11/30/2010 10:19:43 PM
That's really cool, Zero. What are you planning on studying for your major?
I'm currently a Chemistry major. I'm almost ending the first term of my first college year at a place called University of Oregon.
It was very difficult for me to get use to college life. I'm currently taking Organic Chemistry 331 (2nd year class), Organic Chemistry Lab 337 (2nd year class), German 101, and Writing 121 (which is the class that is the most difficult for me). 17 Credits in all.
What made my first year worst is seeing my science major friends in General Chemistry (1st year class) begin to fail at science and change majors. But, I have all B's and higher now so I'm fine.
I think getting TAs are always a hit and miss sorta thing. I told my Organic Chemistry Lab TA that I was only a first year student and that I really didn't understand anything about an experiment, so he was kind enough to really help me get through my first lab experiment. He is also very relaxed on grading.
When I talk to other students in the class, some of them hate their TA because they grade too harshly.
I want to thank everyone who rated my story
on 9/7/2010 12:10:37 AM
Keep up the good work. I wish you good luck on your future Storygames.
on 8/20/2010 2:24:19 AM
So I know that Storygames will be deleted if they are very bad. How worried should I be about this? I am curious because I don't want to put my time and effort into something to have it deleted.
Thank you for your time.