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This is pretty good. We get not only a fair number of mechanical components, items, objectives, and the like, but a great sum of flavor. All the characters have back stories. They aren't flat, they have texture. I love that, and readers love that in general. The only problem is have is some logical disconnects, and maybe a bug or two. I'll send you those via PM, no need to clutter up comments with them. Good work. Clean up some of the problems, awkward link system, repeating events, item use loop, etc. and I'll gladly give you a higher score, not that the one I gave you was bad. :D

Epic story really shows us what goes on in the world

Really good Story

Eh? it's a good game interesting concept of finding out the spy and nice clip arts (wonder if you drew them yourself) and all in all very captive in game play, but... how you assemble the bomb? I have the explosive powder, the wire, and the empty bomb shell, but what else do i need to make a bomb?

It was a really good story, each character had a believable personality, I just wish the bombs would've worked because I had the bomb shells and the fire powder, other than that this game was awesome.

awsome

Even though i have bombs it still comes battle(Without bombs)

The bombs still do NOT work

wow its pretty good i like the ending where amy takes adrians gun and advances towards the enemy! :) 7/8

amazing