Bacon Wars

Well, it is something that this was finished in such a short time, but I’m not impressed with the uses of the English language on the first page with all the swears. Sure, I guess that’s the way you talk and all, but usually that’s just not needed in the written word. Perhaps you can find some other ways to present that information without all the additional swears. For example, swears can work as part of dialogue when you have a character who uses it all the time. That makes sense. But when it is part of the title and directed at the reader, that’s not nearly as effective.

Beyond that, well, at least there are choices in this story. There are indeed options that lead the reader off in different directions and the choices do appear to have a clear effect on the story. Beyond that, well, there’s just not all that much to this story. Most of the story seems to be focused on trying to kill police rather than actually trying to get some bacon. So sure, this was written in 76 minutes, but perhaps it would have been quite a bit better if some more time was spent on it.

Probably one of the best lolrandoms I have read on this site. I haven't even had bacon in my life.

This really wasn't terrible. The humour was a little too 2010 era lol so random for me, but not too terrible overall.

kewl

wtf this is so funny i love the aggresive humour

good

nice way to pass time without getting overly obssessed and wasting 12 hours!

It's very good. It's funny, I can tell the Author has a great sense of humor. Being very short, it kept me clicking through the whole thing. Sometimes I just click through a bad story game to tell the Author to proofread it, but this had very few mistakes.
However, I feel like the maturity level may be low? Just by one. It's not that big a deal, though.

Also, you think you could lend me some bacon? I want it now....

This made no sense whatsoever, but it was kind of entertaining for being a "joke" game. It did make me crave bacon though....

Absolutely Awesome.