Crash Landing

Cringe writing and too many spaces. -10 points cause ordering off the kiddie menu is the way to go for smaller proportions. Ain't no one gonna beat me up for that!

Short and sweet

ending was kinda abrupt. i escaped tho

I mean it was alright it was just kind of random what my choices were. The mechanic ended up being a sleaze bag for no reason and if you don't leave the planet you rot poor and alone which is also not explained.

Minimal effort was put into an interesting concept once again. I would have liked to explore more of this alien planet instead of dying of mundane things like food poisoning, glass slicing my neck, getting shot by the mechanic because I called him a dirtbag, and oh yes rotting.

I mean the writing was ok there just wasn't much length or branching here to be called a story much less an entertaining one at that.

Good story. I wish there was more development to this storygame. With so many options ending in a strange death or rotting alone, I was determined to find more than the one path to escape. I failed. I’m sure I clicked on every link, but it’s late so maybe not... ?

There is certainly some potential for this story. With a bit more development, I would increase my rating to a 4 at least.

Maybe make some other ways to escape? Or allow the ability to live happily ever after with a nice family?

it was cool and a cool story

A very sad tale
As the engine fails to start
Died waiting for Dick

Pretty boring

Quite a good story. Its too easy to escape.

Nice game quite fun