DELTA: The Beginning

A modern storygame by Marx

Player Rating2.47/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 83 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level7/8

"Anything goes"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Player Comments

Short, pointless.

— happystory on 12/18/2016 10:41:38 PM with a score of 0

Colbin's Fate (Rouge Ending)

— Tester on 8/31/2016 1:21:46 AM with a score of 0

Is this some kind of demo you are trying to hide?

— Jimmysutton on 3/31/2016 12:09:49 PM with a score of 0

Really ?

— The_Dungeon_Master on 2/27/2016 7:35:23 PM with a score of 0

Ugh. If your story is only 2/8 in length, WHY DO YOU MAKE A PART 2?

— TheBossWriter on 2/17/2016 3:07:14 PM with a score of 0

Ending rather fast

— gunboat baker on 7/19/2015 1:04:06 PM with a score of 0

Wait, is this a storygame or a joke? Because either way it's not good. Please don't be insulted by this; I mean, it WOULD be good if you actually, you know, actually put some time and effort into it?

— iLikeCereal on 6/11/2015 12:01:45 PM with a score of 0

The dialogue was horrendous. Either stick with quotations or stick with script-like dialogue, don't try to mix the two. Also, There's really no need to serialize a story like this. There are several games on this site, whole games, as in the entire story is contained in one game, that are literally thousands of pages.

— jamescoker1226 on 8/12/2014 1:35:59 PM with a score of 0

not very choose your own...

— Kitsumaru on 6/27/2014 4:43:55 PM with a score of 0

It was okay but I don't really like story games where it shows what people say by typing their names and then a colon. That's how script's are written and this is a story, not a script. Also in the one where you knock the guy out of the plane, how exactly are you supposed to clear your name?... You did it. :p

— Briar_Rose on 11/17/2012 5:16:29 AM with a score of 0

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DELTA: The Beginning

Player Rating2.47/8

Story Difficulty4/8

Play Length2/8

Maturity Level7/8

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