Different Paths

This story game was short, and... well that's it I don't see really any other problem with it. I thought it was good, and there is no specific gender, good work. You painted a picture not a great one, but it was enough. There is always room for more though, but still, good game.

This storygame has a lot a potential. It is very short, and I feel that if it was longer, it could be great. Keep on writing!

You know, It's one of those games that have a low rating, then it turns out to be not so bad. It's short and sweet.

It was a good effort but requires a bit more work.
You start of the story randomly and all of a sudden things happen with no explanation, try to add a bit of a backstory.
You also tell the story quickly and don't describe the whole situation and it all seems very general and bland, try writing a more after each choice and putting in more time.
You had many endings and i liked that, I suggest you keep going and you will get to a good story.

I think this would be a sweet little game. But unfortunately it has no different qualities than any other CYS's. The game is called different paths. And for me that makes me think there are going to be over 20 different endings or something like that. But I think I counted around 8 endings. And the descriptions weren't really descriptions at all. They were really just the bare-bones of the story. Speaking of which, there wasn't a story at all. Just alternate events/occurrences.

So yeah, you could've gone much further with this, but unfortunately, you did not. So for that, my score for you is 2/8. But don't be discouraged. Almost everyone's first story isn't rated too well.