Find Coco the Elephant!

This is a cute little story. I’m guessing that it was indeed intended for children. However, even children could use a bit more to the story. The items were also really neat with excellent pictures included as well. I liked that there were so many items, some had uses, and when they weren’t able to be used, there weren’t error messages.

I do wonder a little about the target audience. With it aimed so low, was the intention for the smaller child to actually read this story? I’m not sure that would happen too often on this site, or actually anywhere on the Internet. So I’m guessing this would be more towards someone reading it to a smaller child. If that’s the case, it works well, but could have perhaps just a little more in the descriptions area of things and places.

I found Coco, and I had fun doing it. The different choices were nice, even if they ended up leading to the same ending. Thank you for sharing this with the site!

Only three or so year olds and under will find any point in this game; I found it amusing enough with the use of the advanced editor but boring in terms of the plot. My eight year old sister is on this site, just telling whoever remarked that there are no five year olds here.

The writing was quite good, and it would be interesting enough for a toddler if they knew how to read and use the computer. :) 4/8.

This storygame would be fun for its target audience (children), so I've rated it a little higher accordingly. Certain things that would detract from a regular storygame, such as a short length, are positives for this storygame given the attention span of young children.

On the other hand, there were some weird spacing issues in some places, and you hadn't accounted for certain situations (for example, when I visited the carpet after receiving the yoyo and then returned to the Toybox, it said I tripped over the yoyo again even though the yoyo was in my inventory at the time).

This story is very fun because you can pick up items and when you make a mistake it doesn't end the story.

Great for my ESL classes!

I enjoyed te story about the stuffed animals.

Amusing and well put together. Short but I enjoyed it.

This was cute. It really brings me back to childhood memories of imagination and stuffed animals.

Cute for kids! :3

It's an okay story. Obviously intended for children, but I still think it could use a little more description and dialogue.