First Dates Can Be Tricky

Player Rating3.88/8

"#327 overall, #45 for 2012"
based on 278 ratings since 11/11/2012
played 11,351 times (finished 496)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Jyoti and Michael are having their first date together, and sometimes first dates can get out of hand.

Player Comments

I actually really enjoyed this storygame, and it held a lot more than expected from the story length. I think that with some more story behind this, it could certainly be one of the better storygames that can be found here.
Very little errors can be found in grammar and spelling, which shows the fort the author put into their storygame.

I really like how the author provided such a fulfilling story with only a small amount of words, which is very impressive to me. On one of that paths, it reveals that there's a whole other story, so that could also be provided to increase the length.

Another thing I enjoyed was how there's different paths available, so it's not linear like some stories that are twice as long but not even as good. Hopefully in the future the author can either add to this or create a whole new storygame altogether, which I would not hesitate to read.

5/8
-- Nyctophilia on 3/1/2017 7:44:02 PM
It was cute. There's a bit that doesn't make sense where you can look in the hallway or the closet and the girl is in two different places, plus depending on what choices you make the girl's personality changed dramatically, but I still liked it. Personally, I'd be putty in the guy's hand after the Disney songs :p
-- Briar_Rose on 11/11/2012 7:20:40 PM
it was ok, a little short though
-- potterhead5225 on 4/10/2017 11:26:53 AM
Now THAT'S romantic...

*cries in corner in acknowledgment such idealistic a date will not be possible in user's life* Anyway, you've got an uncommon story type here. You wrote this in third-person view, but managed to maintain the excellency of the story. It's also one of the not many short stories I've left a good rating on. Still, the length was a bit of a bother, but your apparent mastery of details and wording, and the flowiness of an ideal story in its telling, more than make up for the short length.

Good things really do sometimes come in small packages, and almost all the time they're worth all the cents users have to offer. 6/8.
-- AgentX on 3/4/2017 6:44:01 PM
Too short, boring.
-- Lilla on 2/16/2017 5:22:23 PM
Noice.
-- ZagHero on 10/6/2016 12:24:01 AM
Needs to be a bit longer
-- Robin3443 on 7/22/2016 6:25:16 PM
hahaha so cute :3
-- Honeydusk842 on 5/4/2016 8:53:57 PM
cute
-- kut52 on 1/26/2016 3:49:50 PM
it was really enjoyable to read. My favorite one so far
-- SUPERGRILLY on 12/8/2015 4:22:56 PM
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