Hacker Dacker

Was it all a dream? I don't know I passed out.

Lost for being a good person. -__-

Nice plot, story and writing style. There were quite a few contradictions, which took away from the story, and the path was completely linear, with only one path, and then game over options. I'd recommend trying to add more branches and actual choices to your story. Besides that, good job.

I enjoyed the plot of this game somewhat, but it started to fall apart pretty early on.

I found it amusing that your captors' sole method of torture is to force-feed you snacks. Maybe it's just me, but the image of a couple of mean-looking agents demanding that you eat a shedload of Monster Munch doesn't really sound very threatening. Hell, maybe it is. I don't know. I've never had to deal with such a situation.

Overall the game did feel a bit loosely-held together, but it still kept me playing. A bit more background and thought into the story would work wonders.

Uh.... huh...? So you have your keycard and USB, and when you click "Use your keycard" and "Plug in the USB", it says that you don't have them and you lose the game, but if you use them as an item, everything goes okay... that's a little over the top. Also, the fact that you head to work instead of being late and not siphoning money, when you can just come back the next day, and then losing, just seems like a half-hearted attempt at trying to branch. Same with all the options. Extremely circumstantial things keep happening that kill you, or even save you once or twice. And the fact that you plug in a USB and steal money, and no one sees you or the USB, and then they suspect you and arrest you just because of how the USB LOOKS (Again, no one saw it), is stupid. A ton of people have solid black USBs. And how do they figure out what it looks like? I mean, they can read the digital signature and determine if it is the same USB by plugging it in to a computer, but that doesn't help determine what it looks like. You have a nice plot and some nice ideas, and I can see you put some effort into this (Maybe not a full effort, but still some effort), but I just can't get over these discrepancies in the story...