Last Scream Before You Die

Player Rating3.07/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 51 ratings since 01/02/2015
played 592 times (finished 57)

Story Difficulty8/8

"mosie through a minefield"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

If you thought many of the "horror" story games weren't all that scary, and you were bored of them, you came to the right place to be shivering until your dead. You'll need to find keys and unlock doors to different places and use tools to find your way out. And if you're wondering what the story is about, here it is.

The monster was originally like you, a normal old boy. But one day, he was in a car accident and was killed because a drunk driver ran into you. Now the boy is dead, but the boy isn't going down yet until he kills everyone he knows (unknown why everyone). After getting stuck in a house will you be able to get out alive?

Bloody Picture

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

Player Comments

The text and spacing is a bit weird.....but hey, it's your storygame! A good thing about that is that I can easily notice all of the spelling and grammar mistakes here, so that needs to be fixed. Remember, proofreading is the writer's best friend! The use of pictures is very nice, but maybe some more could be included along with more description, because pictures don't make up for all escroption a story needs.

You did one thing right, and that's giving the reader complete control over their actions. A linear story isn't a good one, so it's very nice to have a storygame like this I can enjoy and choose my options without having my character do things I didn't have a say in. I just wish that we had some kind of warning about the boy that kills the character (spoiler!) rather than we die as soon as we open the door.

With a bit more detail, length, effort, and background, this could be a very good storygame that could bring something great to the horror section of CYS.

4/8
-- Nyctophilia on 3/1/2017 7:45:16 PM with a score of 0
Feel deathly? The sentence spacing is a bit… weird too. The pictures are well used though and a bit of thought went into this story game which is good but if the written descriptions were serious instead of breaking the fourth wall all the time I would have felt more tension, you’re constantly reminding us it’s just a game instead of an actual experience. Still, I thought it was ok :)
-- Will11 on 1/2/2015 3:08:28 AM with a score of 0
Creepy
-- Pugtaco on 9/23/2016 11:27:35 AM with a score of 0
Ahh that jumpscare was so creepy!
-- Ginnyweasleybooklove on 9/6/2016 9:12:16 PM with a score of 0
While several the pictures were gruesome and suitably shocking, this story on its own plays like an unfinished puzzle. Worth the momentary amusement, but not worth the frustration of trying to solve it.
-- the_quiller on 2/27/2016 3:59:55 PM with a score of 0
OMG LOL!! I only got a few pages in and died! But that picture of what appears to be Michael Jackson (R.I.P) after getting into the lipstick again, almost gave me a heart attack!! Good story, I'm going to read more of it. I hope you write lots more!
-- corgi213 on 8/26/2015 8:47:38 PM with a score of 0
It wasn't that scary to be honest, but a certain death picture is gonna give me nightmares for weeks.
-- Chris113022 on 7/20/2015 4:46:57 PM with a score of 0
This game was pretty linear and derp, but I have to admit the death picture was pretty creepy.
-- GMB13carat on 7/7/2015 11:17:23 AM with a score of 0
The pick gets you stuck you have to die a very bad idea and the pics were weird
-- gamebruh on 5/18/2015 1:04:19 PM with a score of 0
I can't do anything but die.
-- jayfeather808 on 5/17/2015 7:37:06 PM with a score of 0
Show All Comments