Rebel Jedi

Decent story game, although it would be great to have some sort of background instead of "Jedi steals speeder and fights his way into a temple" (I assume this is the ending we were supposed to get)

It's short. Too short. You need to give the reader time to immerse himself into the story, you can't just end it the second readers start to get interested.

Also, I don't get it, how is he a rebel Jedi? It seems as if he's just a plain, normal Jedi.

What fight was he coming back from? (You said he lost his light saber, but offered no explanation as to the year, very little on location, and if the Jedi had just come back from a war, were was the war, why did it happen? Ect ect...)
There are too many holes in the story to rate it any higher than a 4/8.
Normally I'd be mor critical of this story but there is a lot of praise for the next two episodes in the series, so I'll wait until I finish those 2 before judging you too harshly

I am disturbed that this has managed to keep a rating above 3.

Why is this so short???

There's only one right path, and if you take the others you die. Not much variety here.

good

Good start.

Epic... Amazing I might add! But, could use improvement. Keep up the good work! :)

That was good

its short and shit

interesting take