The Knight

A fantasy storygame by Skull09840

Player Rating1.95/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 32 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"Trek through the forest"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Player Comments

...Whah?...

— ISentinelPenguinI on 10/19/2013 10:04:18 PM with a score of 0

There is not enough explanations, in this game, for example which time line is it going on in? It is also, way to short it took me 2 min to finish, but besides that i like the idea, and the start is quite good it just needs a bit more text.

— PengiunsCanFly on 9/28/2013 8:22:32 AM with a score of 0

do finish this game.

— Il_Maestro on 9/9/2013 1:34:09 PM with a score of 0

Im so fucking confused.

— Nuclearwarfareaw10 on 9/7/2013 8:46:02 PM with a score of 0

Awesome Does NOT Approve!
First of all, I give this a low rating for the lack of pages. This is usually a mistake most new writers make, and never bother to fix. This story was incredibly short, and I finished within a minute. Another thing. Add more detail to the pages. Yes, I'm a knight, but I only know this from the title. Eating and sleeping aren't really important, and don't affect the player in any way. An expanded story with more links would be enough for a higher rating.
1/8

— awesomeness1242 on 9/7/2013 8:00:02 PM with a score of 0

Meh. 3/8.

— jack10345 on 9/5/2013 9:00:05 PM with a score of 0

This isn't even a backbone of a story, this is the last line in the lower spine that is so small and vestigial.

— alienalpha on 9/4/2013 11:13:50 PM with a score of 0

Way to linear try to expand your horizons and make it longer. It wouldn't hurt to make it a bit more expanded. But it's a good first attempt.

The Knight

Player Rating1.95/8

Story Difficulty3/8

Play Length1/8

Maturity Level4/8

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