Woolf stone

It was well written and all, with few spelling mistakes but there was one major issue I only gave it a three. There were no choices.

Sure, there were about three links on every page, which simply lead to one sentence before taking me backwards. That isn't writing, it's just forcing players into picking until they find the path that makes them progress.

I'm not trying to be mean, just constructive. In these types of storygames, people expect choices. However in this, there was one real path, multiple dead ends, and I counted one ending after playing three times.

I think there should be some way to actually lose, because this seemed like it was some sort of challenge and mystery to find the right person, but it simply took me back over and over until I chose the right one... Although you supplies clues I guess, there should be at least one bad ending.

Not badly written, but there were a fair amount of mistakes, and this didn't quite strike me as amazing. I guess I sorta enjoyed it, but it needs more paths and branching.

Fun. Easy. Enjoyable. Too many spelling errors.

Hmm...much better than I expected, though you kept using strange spellings of certain words :)
Such as "hopping" instead of hoping, and "jem" instead of gem.