You V.S Zombies

The descriptions were excessively short, many endings seemed abrupt and illogical (like how one man randomly does a pirouette like a bloody ballerina and cuts your throat).

Try going for more detail and sense.

the maturity level should be like 2-3, not 7!

There wasn't any real description of the setting. There was no backstory. A lot of the endings felt lazy. Those are just a few things to work on.

It was fine, but it didn't really stand out from any other games.

It was alright, but was very shoddy.

So, once I got to the plane no matter what I did I got killed

I'll be honest; I thought it was a bit lazy. I like the fact that you did put some effort into this and is certainly better than some other games that I've played, but this was just a bit poor.

That was pretty cool. It should be rated for all ages. I survived :D

You spelled embarrassed wrong, lol. You should make this longer and have more of a story to it.

so there was no way to kill the girl...well that sucks