A Cat Day

Player Rating1.61/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 51 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

"A Cat Day" is a game where you are a pet cat, and decide what to do during the day. This is a pretty short game - as it's my first. Hope you enjoy! If you don't, you can leave some suggestions and NO NEGATIVE FEEDBACK.

 

Have Fun! Meow!!!

Player Comments

I think it's a cute game, but kind of unrealistic. My cat bites me all the time, but I never make her live outside. All in all it's very short but it's okay, I'll give it that. Maybe try another one, this time longer and more descriptive.
-- Silverwolf1175 on 8/7/2016 2:01:57 PM
Length of a 1 out of 50
-- Robin3443 on 7/29/2016 10:00:32 PM
No negative feedback? Well, in that case how about a negative joke that in no way helps the author to improve, unlike negative feedback? The average rating for this story game leads me to believe that this is actually a sandbox. Get it? For a cat to poop in?

Well, now that I have that out of my system, here is some actual feedback:
This game was far to short and simplistic.
If it featured branching paths instead of one linear one, this could be fun, but this not that.
-- QlhAah123 on 7/29/2016 2:17:24 AM
If you're a cat person, or you wish you owned a cat, this might be worth the 30 seconds it takes to play. Otherwise, move on.
-- the_quiller on 2/27/2016 11:48:39 PM
Wish it was a little longer and more eventful, but otherwise, great!
-- WildeKatz on 2/13/2016 10:04:33 PM
I think it's a cute game. :) Maybe Ina sequel a chance to escape by adding an open door? I don't know just a suggestion. I enjoyed it. Even though it's not GREAT, it's pretty good for a first story. Good job.
-- AsianTrumpeteer on 2/11/2016 1:07:34 AM
It's way too short. The grammar and spelling is alright, but it's still too short.
-- WizzyCat on 2/9/2016 8:52:27 AM
What the? That was quick. Try making it longer. And I don't think saying no negative comments makes people not comment negatively on your story.
-- Cheesy on 2/5/2016 9:07:27 AM
So you put this on the Internet for everyone to see and try to tell us that we can't give you negative feedback? That's stupid.

This game took me less than a minute to read. The only way this game could have four eights would be if you/your friends/trolls rated it eight. This game will soon be in the trash bin with the Warrior Cat stories, where it belongs. No one will be able to give it negative feedback there.
-- Marco820aa2001 on 2/5/2016 12:00:03 AM
I will rate this story based off of a title of a Western movie because I believe this story deserves no less.
The Good:
I loved the line "Eat *nom nom nom*". It was of such high quality, it almost beat "Plan 9 from Outer Space" in quality (which is something that I cannot say often). Furthermore, I loved the guts you had in writing. You managed to not follow almost every law in writing choose your own adventures... ever. In fact, I would say that you mostly did the exact opposite. It would surely take an almost absurd amount of [place your own noun here] to do that.
The Bad:
The only thing that was bad was that it was so short. I was thoroughly gripped by the story, and I wish that it could continue so badly. I would almost rather choose the story being any longer over watching paint dry (which is of course something anybody would want to do).
The Ugly:
All of the comments. This story is pure gold!... Or maybe it is pure iron pyrite... Or maybe it is better than... ummm...
Well, I will simply skip this section do to a loss of words because of "NO NEGATIVE FEEDBACK".

A word of advice to storycat. DO NOT EVER SAY "NO NEGATIVE FEEDBACK" WHEN YOUR STORY IS DEEMED WORTHY OF A 2/8. THE RESULTS WILL BE FUNNY. (Also, do not make a phrase or sentence in all capital letters. As you can see, it makes it look quite unappealing.)
-- WouldntItBeNice on 2/4/2016 9:30:11 PM
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