Player Comments on A Confused Criminal!

Okay, so...aside from the fact that you never find out why the police are after you (they just are), almost every path leads to a bad end. Or if it doesn't lead there, it leads to a junction where EVERY path is bad. It doesn't matter whether you fight the security guard or not. Every path in the corresponding 6 links is bad.

The character's behaviour seemed a bit out of place as well. You've just managed to escape the rock concert, you immediately tell a stranger that the police are after you? Why would you do that? And it turns out that the stranger wants you to rob a bank for him? You just told him that the police are after you and he asks you to commit a real crime? It just doesn't make any sense.

There's a lot of decisions but most of them are on the same linear path. That's my biggest gripe, really. They pretended to lead somewhere, and they just ended up with you being captured. That definitely needs improvement.

'Your standing in the middle of a rock concert. Your getting pushed and shoved into people.' Errors in the first two sentences, a huge red flag and indicator that a story received no proofreading whatsoever.

And if you're running from the police, why do you have to sit there and think a few minutes to remember that? Did the character have some head injury you forgot to mention?

Rough start aside, this wasn't terrible or anything and the writing is pretty decent (though I'd appreciate it if there weren't quite so many sentences starting with 'You'...) I feel like a reasonable amount of effort was put in, and all the pictures were a nice touch.

A few more details about the character, their thoughts, anything would have gone a long way to flesh this out though. In the paths I saw at least, the entire plot was just one long chase jumping from one escape to another without any explanation.

And then 50 police officers jumped out of no where and all pointed guns at me. Okay. I'd have appreciated the story at least continuing to the actual arrest so I'd know what the character is supposed to have done...

The story had great visuals, and that's about it. The plot had no sense of urgency. It was just one moment you're being chased by police, and in the next you're deciding to do other random and pointless things. It's disappointing too, because the character that you come across could've really been developed further if you took the time to write more. This story felt underdeveloped and while better than other stories on the site, it really needs improvement.

BEST GAME EVRRRRRRRR

bitch you suck

it needs to be more exciting and not every battyfish person likes rese

"The limo is filled with soda, colorful lights, televisions, computers, and even a jacuzzi!"

Only a 10-year-old would think a limo would be filled with soda. Although this was written eight years ago, so perhaps now the author is just starting to figure this out.

This story was straight up whack yo. Me and my girlfriend can’t sleep and it’s 5am and this story was worse than staring at a wall and pretending a movie was playing

Well, I got caught! But it was good

Overall, the game was ok

To Saika- I survived twice

Kinda short

Great Game!

I finally won on my 300th try. Continuously leads to routes where all choices are wrong. And policemen are available at every corner. 3/8

This game is terrible I can't win no matter what don't waste your time on this game i recommend zombie survival

This was a good read. You can see you put effort into this and the pictures added to the story. However, there were quite a few errors in the writing, and some of the choices result in exactly the same end game page no matter what - I must have been arrested by 50 policemen three times before I finally escaped.
This was a decent attempt, especially for your first game. Next time just make sure to proofread everything before you publish which will hopefully iron out those small errors, as well as adding more depth to the story and its characters. For example, we never found out why we were on the run.

Awesome thanks

interesting game. i enjoyed that.

I was wondering how the police could find me so fast?

Good Short Game

GRRRRRRRRRREAT

It was really fun just add some more game sentences.

Really good game. I like it

easy win fun too

Not bad at all but so easy :)

50 police men? Walking toward the fire? I truly am a confused criminal...

Fuck, stupid fire :(

Wow, I loved this game. There were so many confusing dead ends and losing endings with the annoying fire that keeps popping up, where 50 policemen aim their guns at you. Just great. It was even slightly more fun than homework.

I wasn't pulled into the story that much. You need somethin that compells people to click that link. the best part was when the guy tried to kill me. what fun!

okay, i walk into a fire and 50 policemen point guns at me?

This was definitely entertaining. One complaint I have is that most of the sentences sounded exactly the same, as in, "You see a cat. You walk over to the cat. You hear the cat meow. You pet the cat. You don't trust the cat. You think the cat is nice. You still don't trust it." But that's very a minor annoyance. Also...do we ever know why we're running from the police?
Despite that, though, it was pretty fun.

Good game.

Not that bad

That was exceptionally interesting.
That reminds me of a guy that i used to work with.

This game is boring no matter what you do you always get caught don't play this game.

nice..

Well it wasn't bad but I tried all the options I could find and I never found that twist you promised. Also most of the paths you could take all seemed to lead to the same places, which kinda put me off.

okay

More options would be better, good writing

Quite a nice game man. Too bad I got caught right away when I stole the boat and headed for the campfire thingy. :D Thanks for the fun.

The spelling and grammar were exceptional but the story was not engaging and the choices seemed arbitrary.

It was fun, but I'd prefer it if there were more clues as to how not to get caught. Most options that lead to you getting caught seem like they would be totally fine.It turns into somewhat of a guessing game.

How is the difficulty 3

The good parts were that it had a lot of options, the pictures helped with the detail, and it was actually going somewhere with the plot. The bad parts, which for me really held back this game, was the difficulty. It was just too hard at times. I eventually got the good ending but some links, no matter what you did, led to nowhere but dead ends which is just no fun. Also, you didn't provide any hints on how I could make the right choice. It was either do the correct action or fail.

5/8

After going back like 20 times, I finally escaped. Too many ways to get caught.

Good game, but pretty easy to get caught.

Very quick but more detail was needed I think.

pretty cool i liked it a lot

Some might say it's random, but then again if you're in the mind of a criminal how are you going to know what's going on in other places? I liked it, but it didn't "wow" me 5/8

could be improved upon. It was too random for a story.

the writing was good, but the plot was a little dry. you gotta stop having it going to the same place. I'm not sure about the others who'll play it, but this was a bit random for my taste. 3/8