Player Comments on APUSH Choose Your Own Adventure

This was alright, it certainly had potential. But I feel as though it was way too short, there were plenty of choices but it seems like half of them didn't really mean anything. I would encourage you to read some of the featured storygames and see how they work before writing another one.
Then spend the next several weeks putting all the work in, lazy stories don't go far here. Still, it was better than a lot of the other stories you'd see around here. Keep up the work.

The other day, I read about three pages, and thought, "well this is terrible but it's a lot better than things other people have published."

Well, I read some more, and I change my mind. Kill it with fire. This is bad and you should feel bad.

...I died, therefore no homework