Player Comments on astor the huntsman v2

The shifting perspectives is super annoying and disorienting. I don't understand how the money (and how it's spent) fits into the story, and the story really needs proper grammar. It shows promise, but you need to HAVE a story to effectively write about it.

This game has the same problem as the first one, where it switches between second and third person POV. At the beginnin, the game says "You start hearing rumors of unusual military activity, which is really worrying astor" ... I thought I WAS Astor. If I'm not Astor than who am I? :p