Can you survive this?

This didn't take much time to make, did it?

I hate to be the one to rate this a one, but I did for multiple reasons. First of all, you say it yourself in the story summary, 'One wrong choice means your death'. While that's all fine and dandy, that only works in certain types of games, and even then, at certain parts. The reason this wasn't fun at all was because of it. It should be a game, but I was being forced to think like YOU think, not like myself. That made it harder, but even then, I beat this in maybe two minutes. Additionally, some of the deaths (like where you call 911 right at the start) were random and had nothing to do with the previous scenario and couldn't have been seen coming or avoided.

There also was no solid story, with random things happening for no apparent reason. Where did the monsters come from? Why are they out to kill me? Who am I?! These could have been easily answered, and I hope that after reading this, you can think about your work and how you can apply everyone's advice to it.

Its ok

Typical, you are never seen again anyways

This is the best damn game I ever play! (It are awesome! P.S. I'm not the author trying to get good ratings.)

U mm non of this made sense for example the 911 death at the beginning

Just...eh.

That was the quickest horror story ever. I liked it, but I really think you should wait till' the end before you announce if you win or lose. I really do not get it how you made a girl kiss then kill. GOOD STORY!

I liked it

This was like a horrible episode of csi.

PILE OF SHIT MY DOG MAKES BETTER STORIES THEN THIS SHIT