Player Comments on Career Story: IVEY Edition
I liked it but there are some big flaws here.
First of all, all the business stuff made for a pretty boring CYOA, but I suppose it was bearable. I liked the choices and how they related to the storygame and the outcome, but maybe more character development and plot development would have been good for this storygame because all the business chatter made me less and less interested as I read on.
The end was pretty dumb, and it feels like all this was just to promote your facebook page. Please don't try to use the site for this kind of thing, but the CYOA was decent overall.
I think it was definitely well studied, and I can imagine a business going through the events that took place in this storygame.
While i'm not interested in business in the slightest, I found this interesting for a CYOA but it could have more of an actual plot to it, maybe.
on 3/22/2017 12:39:40 AM with a score of 0
This piqued my interest, as I'm going to choose a career in Business. Very well written, however it wasn't... fun. Though, it was probably focused less on fun and more on the actual subject matter. While informative, its not something for you if you aren't interested in business or career quizzes.
-- meme man on 2/9/2016 6:38:02 PM with a score of 0
A fun game-keno351
on 9/30/2016 1:47:42 PM with a score of 0
Very nice for what it is.
on 7/9/2016 8:56:23 PM with a score of 0
The story was OK. Needs work, but definitely has potential!
on 5/8/2016 5:57:01 PM with a score of 0
Ok? Maybe this just needs some work, alot of work.
on 4/7/2016 2:51:05 PM with a score of 0
Wow. This wasn't really a good CYOA, but, as a business major, I am infinitely intrigued by this game. 6/8
on 8/9/2014 9:07:04 AM with a score of 0
It certainly wasn't anything special. Maybe you could of gave me more information or scenarios.
on 7/29/2014 8:29:58 AM with a score of 0
i hated it
-- timothy on 7/11/2014 4:06:08 PM with a score of 0
im going with kind of good i gave it a five but that was barely
on 3/9/2013 6:12:10 PM with a score of 0
Well the writing was really good, but what a strange subject to make a choose your story game about :p
on 11/10/2012 6:03:15 AM with a score of 0
on 7/12/2012 5:22:52 AM with a score of 0
I'm not really sure about that one...
on 5/24/2012 4:46:47 PM with a score of 0
Pros:its well written not that linear
on 5/23/2012 9:11:09 AM with a score of 0
kind of good :T
on 3/21/2012 8:45:50 AM with a score of 0
on 3/20/2012 5:50:30 PM with a score of 0
Not bad :)
on 3/20/2012 9:50:20 AM with a score of 0