Player Comments on Career Story: IVEY Edition

I liked it but there are some big flaws here.

First of all, all the business stuff made for a pretty boring CYOA, but I suppose it was bearable. I liked the choices and how they related to the storygame and the outcome, but maybe more character development and plot development would have been good for this storygame because all the business chatter made me less and less interested as I read on.

The end was pretty dumb, and it feels like all this was just to promote your facebook page. Please don't try to use the site for this kind of thing, but the CYOA was decent overall.

I think it was definitely well studied, and I can imagine a business going through the events that took place in this storygame.

While i'm not interested in business in the slightest, I found this interesting for a CYOA but it could have more of an actual plot to it, maybe.

3/8, decent.
-- MinnieKing on 3/22/2017 12:39:40 AM with a score of 0
This piqued my interest, as I'm going to choose a career in Business. Very well written, however it wasn't... fun. Though, it was probably focused less on fun and more on the actual subject matter. While informative, its not something for you if you aren't interested in business or career quizzes.
-- meme man on 2/9/2016 6:38:02 PM with a score of 0
A fun game-keno351
-- keno351 on 9/30/2016 1:47:42 PM with a score of 0
Very nice for what it is.
-- skugga on 7/9/2016 8:56:23 PM with a score of 0
The story was OK. Needs work, but definitely has potential!
-- johnkoehler on 5/8/2016 5:57:01 PM with a score of 0
Ok? Maybe this just needs some work, alot of work.
-- Jimmysutton on 4/7/2016 2:51:05 PM with a score of 0
Wow. This wasn't really a good CYOA, but, as a business major, I am infinitely intrigued by this game. 6/8
-- jamescoker1226 on 8/9/2014 9:07:04 AM with a score of 0
It certainly wasn't anything special. Maybe you could of gave me more information or scenarios.
-- Madbrad200 on 7/29/2014 8:29:58 AM with a score of 0
i hated it
-- timothy on 7/11/2014 4:06:08 PM with a score of 0
im going with kind of good i gave it a five but that was barely
-- JamesValkyrie on 3/9/2013 6:12:10 PM with a score of 0
Well the writing was really good, but what a strange subject to make a choose your story game about :p
-- Briar_Rose on 11/10/2012 6:03:15 AM with a score of 0
Good writing
-- Xt1000305 on 7/12/2012 5:22:52 AM with a score of 0
I'm not really sure about that one...
-- TaraPhoenix on 5/24/2012 4:46:47 PM with a score of 0
Pros:its well written not that linear

Cons: short


6/8
-- bells23 on 5/23/2012 9:11:09 AM with a score of 0
kind of good :T
-- ZenUndead on 3/21/2012 8:45:50 AM with a score of 0
Meh
-- ThisisBo on 3/20/2012 5:50:30 PM with a score of 0
Not bad :)
-- BerkaZerka on 3/20/2012 9:50:20 AM with a score of 0
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