Player Comments on Choose your own birthday adventure

Meh.

You probably would've been better off spending a couple hours fleshing everything out and fixing mistakes, etc. As it is, I give this a 2.

A good short story to keep yourself entertained for some five minutes or so...Not bad at all!

I laughed so hard for some reason

Short boring lame

Not bad, but not the best either. also, was this meant for someone?

Not very well, just not very well.

Towards the beginning, you have about two options per page. Strangely, only one option leads you to the next page, where-as the next option leads to a 'comment and rate' page. Really? No ending for the option? C'mon.

Secondly, you're simply thrown in there. I mean, I know it isn't supposed to be all about long characters and heavy plots, but I honestly didn't care about any characters. My favorite was the Soviet Wom*a*n. And that was only because she literally shoved it up her ass.

Also, even when you get to the actual ending, there's no resolution or climax. Like, right before the ending, it just cuts off.

But, it is funny, which negates the amount of negativity my previous points carry. 3/8.

lol good and funney

Hmm.. its ok , it is kind of funny !and its original. rated 5/8

It was okay, although I recommend lengthening it and/or adding more choices. I understand that this is possibly a birthday present, however. I would expect a lot more in it if this is really the case. However it is okay, you could do a lot more with it.

good but too short

... It wasn't horrific, but I can't really say anything good about it, either.

I'll be homest, I'm not too sure of the point if it....

Pretty dire, to be perfectly honest. Badly written, riddled with typing mistakes and grammatical errors and looked to have been thrown together in the space of a few minutes.

Wow! That reminds me of the movie freeky Friday! i think that I'll read that again!

It was... Meh. The spelling and grammar was good, but this seens to be made FOR someone. Those of us not in on it don't get it.

Well, I have no idea why this was rated a 2. The writing was decent, with nothing horrible. The storyline was a little weird but that is no big matter. I think this should be placed in Everything else instead of Fantasy Adventure.

Pretty good. Needs a bit of work to be more coherent.

You kiss your favorite girlfriend? ... Does that mean you have other girlfriends? Slut! :p

Good use of images with the watch and the creepy lady.

More placeholder crap. Sorry if I'm being so harsh, but randomness just doesn't cut it.

what?

Good amount of text, good grammar...
And not much else.

What the Hell was the author smoking?

Its just a random adventure, nothing else.

it's not even a birthday adventure!
it's just a stupid contest

good for you..... to poop on

Yeah I won the watch. Oh wait, I'm not Matty...