Player Comments on Control Your: Pack

Good?

— Jayheart4Ever on 5/3/2016 3:20:08 PM with a score of 0

That was pretty short

— Bob on 3/10/2016 5:29:46 PM with a score of 0

Barely worth the effort to comment, but I felt the need to say just this:

What.

— the_quiller on 2/27/2016 4:18:27 PM with a score of 0

What in fuck's mind were you thinking when you were making this story... O.o Well, it was bad. And i am a sociopath...

— CurseOfTime on 2/18/2016 7:11:07 PM with a score of 0

... Why the hell were wolves gathering fruit and berries? O.O

— Briar_Rose on 2/1/2016 5:32:03 AM with a score of 0

.0009 out 8
Utter garbage .
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— Shadow_Strider on 1/30/2016 5:59:40 PM with a score of 0

I'm sorry, but what even is this??

— Hazel_Zhang on 12/30/2015 4:32:14 PM with a score of 0

Agree 100% with Sophaderp, 1/8

— Warriorstar on 10/4/2015 12:17:46 PM with a score of 0

Really confused about what just happened here.
Too short.
Not enough choices.
1/8.

— Sophaderp on 10/1/2015 4:16:33 AM with a score of 0

"This is the first game in my new series, "Control Your" because this is my first one this will be short and not to many choices but hey what can you do?"

Well, you could write more choices for starters and not blitz out a game in an afternoon. Or you could shrug your shoulders and say "But what can you do?", that works too, if a bit (well, more than a bit) lazy.

— Aducan on 9/26/2015 6:09:31 AM with a score of 0

On the fight! page you wrote corsages instead of courage, if that was a mistake, if not then never mind.

— corgi213 on 9/18/2015 9:12:28 PM with a score of 0

I thought this was going to be about how to excercise perfect control of your own wildly rock-hard abs in order to master Drunken Boxing. I was sorely disappointed.

— ISentinelPenguinI on 9/16/2015 11:29:28 AM with a score of 0

This game was good

— Plaacchei on 9/15/2015 11:43:20 PM with a score of 0

The story has a good concept. There's just a few things that need to be addressed...
-Please fix the grammar. There are a lot of times where I'll see confusion with "their" instead of "there".
- Some of the text is too condensed. Try breaking paragraphs up into 2-3 sentences.

Control Your Pack does have potential. There's not that many short stories like that on this site, and the length does entice people that don't want to commitment of a longer story. Please fix the grammar!

— AppDude27 on 9/15/2015 2:01:08 AM with a score of 0

These wolves seem oddly like they've attended West Point at some formative time in their cubhood but overall this wasn't long or challenging enough to inspire, I like the Control Your something idea though :) Control your Herd of Rabid Elephants, Control your Mutated Duck-Billed Platypus or Control Charlie Sheen are all far more interesting titles in my opinion that might offer more challenges, all your really need to control a wolf in real life is a cage and regular food source (those who love wolves so much might be interested in getting up close and personal with a pack that hasn't been fed for a few days and see how much the love is reciprocated. I think they'd be lucky to get in more than one tear-filled hug before express their own feelings through the medium of their teeth).:)

— Will11 on 9/14/2015 10:58:00 PM with a score of 0

Extremely short. To be honest, I expected more.
Oh boy, wolf sims are back? And it's a wolf /pack/ sim where you're a leader? *sarcasm mode activated* My, oh my, where did you ever get such an idea? Maybe clicking through Forum Games?
Of course, I don't actually believe you used the idea of Ruling Creatures. However, I only got to click a few options before the game was over. The English was fine at best.
3/8. Some effort detected, but there's more to a wolf pack than fending off one rival pack.

— DerpBacon on 9/14/2015 8:22:08 PM with a score of 0